Episode 26

Apr. 27th, 2009 09:37 am
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Okay, here we are! Thank you to everyone for your help and suggestions and, of course, for your continued support of the Soap! I think this week's episode is better than last, though you guys may not like Cloud any better. He's come out decidedly sassy, but in this soap everyone evolves and changes, so we'll keep our fingers crossed for him and I'm sure that there is a story in the future that changes his life!

And two very talented artists have done me the honor of submitting fanwork for the Soap! I have included their pictures at the end of the episode for everyone to enjoy! I cannot thank them enough for their work and I can't explain how flattered and delighted I am to have inspired such beautiful pieces!


So, here we are with Episode 26!


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26

Rufus was furious.

He’d been scolded like a child in front of his wife by a mother who’d been absent for over fifteen years, and now he was forced to go into work because he simply had never been able to stand against Scarlet’s unruffled strength. It was the most aggravating thing he’d known so far in his adult life, that his mother still held such sway over him.

“Mister ShinRa,” his secretary said, clearly startled to see him. “Good morning, Sir!”

“Morning,” he sourly replied. “Get me some coffee, I—”

He broke off when he looked into his father’s office and saw the co-chair of ShinRa Industries in a heated debate with someone on his father’s phone, sitting at his father’s desk…

“What the fuck is Lazard doing in there?” he asked, startling his secretary.

“Oh…your father, he’s called in today, Sir,” she replied, hedging to get away.

Called in?” Rufus echoed, aghast. His father had never missed a day of work in his life—as the President of a country as well as this company, he had far too many responsibilities.

“Yes, Sir,” she softly said. “He told Mister Deusericus to run things in his stead.”

Rufus flushed to the tips of his toes and promptly stomped his way to his father’s office, throwing open the door to loudly proclaim, “You have absolutely no right to be here!”

“Please, excuse me, may I call you back? Alright then, thank you ever so,” Lazard said, and hung up the phone with a smug smile. “And what a pleasure to see you again, Rufus. How long has it been? A month? Two months? What’s wrong? Has that nasty monsoon put a cramp in your golfing activities?”

“Listen, Deusericus, I have no idea why my father isn’t here or why he figured you should run things while he is away, but as his son and heir it is my right t—”

“Rufus,” Larazd cut in, bored. “Your father is out ill today—”

“One simply doesn’t call in sick to running a country!”

“—and you haven’t come to work for weeks on end. He needed someone who knows how to run things and has been helping to run things more and more,” the man said, ignoring Rufus’s furious statement. “Now, I suggest that if you want to take over the running of both this company and this country, you need to pull your head out of your ass and pay attention, because if you can’t do it, I will.”

Rufus glowered at him, but the truth was undeniable. He knew nothing about his father’s work, had no interest in it until it looked as if Lazard might take over. His pride wouldn’t allow him to let that happen and his love of power dictated that he do what he could to keep his father’s position secured for himself.

“Then I suggest you begin showing me,” he tightly said.

Lazard smiled at him and took off his glasses, wiping them with a dainty white handkerchief as he said, “Now. There’s some spirit!”


Scarlet turned out to be exceptionally helpful to Yazoo when they finally arrived at the gallery. The woman had been hostess to Presidential functions before she and ShinRa Senior had split, and she was still friendly with many of the people with whom Yazoo needed to work. Together, they were able to consult with the decorators, get a crew hired to transport the paintings, another to hang them, and laid out a floor plan to show them to the best advantage in the space. Scarlet suggested having drop lighting brought in and the gallery manager was more than willing and happy to comply. It was something that Yazoo would never have thought of until the paintings had arrived, but Scarlet’s suggestion would save them time later, and he was thankful for it. Together, the two of them were able to have the entire show prepped and planned for by the late afternoon, and the awkwardness in the car was forgotten as they got to know one another. Yazoo found Scarlet to be candid and practical, but she also possessed a wry sense of humor that Yazoo had fleetingly seen in his husband. He couldn’t help but wish that Rufus had inherited even a sliver of his mother’s can-do, no-nonsense attitude…

            “I imagine you are wondering why I’ve suddenly come back, then?” Scarlet asked. The two of them had decided to go to a late lunch down the street from the gallery at a bistro that Yazoo had suggested. They were sitting outside at one of the wrought iron tables, the pleasantly cool breeze teasing the napkins and the ruffle on the shielding umbrella. Rude had declined to sit with them and was standing in quiet attendance nearby, his hands crossed in front of him and his head turning ever so slightly as he constantly scanned the sidewalk and what traffic there was on the cobbled street beyond.

            “I…” Yazoo smiled a little and sipped his tea, blushing. “I will admit that I am curious, yes. I was made to understand that you had not parted well with Mister ShinRa. It is, understandably, none of my business, of course. But I will not say that I am not curious.”

            “Of course,” Scarlet said, smiling warmly. She, too, sipped her tea, and let her blue eyes drift to the street. “No, Ronald and I parted under the worst circumstances imaginable—he stole my son from me, though I don’t believe that has ever bothered either of them. I am wondering, has he spoken to you at all?”

            “Not recently,” Yazoo answered, concern wrinkling his smooth brow. “Is he well?”

            Scarlet looked at him and softly said, “He is as well as can be expected, I suppose, and I will leave the rest for him to tell. But I have returned because we have finally managed to be civil to one another. It’s only taken twenty-odd years, but we’ve done it.”

            She smiled, her full red lips curving as she sighed, “I have a chance to know him after all of these years, a chance to know my son…”

            She turned that smile on Yazoo and added, “A chance to know you. And I certainly hope we shall be friends.”

            “I would like that,” Yazoo said, touched. “And I think once Rufus gets over his surprise, he will be much less…less…”

            “Less Rufus?” Scarlet suggested, and laughed in a way that Yazoo was helpless to resist.

 


 

            Still believing himself to be the butt of a nasty, really odd joke, Reeve took his phone call out in the hallway, relieved to be away from the two rival friends.

            “The gallery space is secured and all of the arrangements are made,” Yazoo assured him, her voice soothing and soft. “The crew should be there any moment to pick up your artwork and bring it in. We have places for everything but, naturally, we wish to have you give the final approval, so if you would come by the gallery tomorrow then we can work out the final details.”

            “That’s…that’s wonderful!” he sighed, relieved. “Thank you so much, Mrs. ShinRa! I can’t…I just…You do realize what an opportunity you are giving me?”

            “It is only what talent like yours deserves,” Yazoo laughed, delighted. “And I do hate to sound condescending or even intrusive, but about your formal wear…”

            Reeve blushed a little but gamely said, “I have none, actually.”

            “Then would you mind terribly if I treated you to a shopping trip? I find myself in need of a few new dresses and it would be no trouble to have your clothing done along the way,” Yazoo suggested. “The crowds which will be viewing your art are terribly superficial, and I should hate for anything unfortunate to arise from lack of a simple nice suit.”

            Reeve didn’t know how to respond, but he understood the necessity of it and knew that so much hinged on impressions with these people.

            “I insist you allow me to pay you back,” he tried, agreeing in the only way that he could.

            “Nonsense,” Yazoo sighed. “Mister Tuesti, you are, in essence, gifting me with a painting that should cost a small fortune, and which brings me many wonderful, happy memories of my home. I believe the cost of a suit is negligible in the face of your generosity.”

            “Well,” he laughed, flattered by her and yet hesitant. “When you put it that way…”

            “Then it is settled!” Yazoo said. “Do you mind awfully if I come to your studio and help oversee the removal of the paintings?”

            “Please do!” Reeve said, happy to have the extra help. “I will be here, along with Yuffie and Mister Rhapsodos.”

            “Oh, wonderful!” Yazoo cried. “We shall all go shopping together! See you soon, Mister Tuesti!”

            “Wait, Mrs. ShinRa!” he cried, and blushed beet red when he asked, “Have you arranged catering?”

            It annoyed him that he even asked, but ever since Genesis had mentioned it, damn the man…

            “It will all be taken care of,” Yazoo laughed. “Goodbye, Mister Tuesti.”

            “Goodbye,” he said, and hung up his cell phone.

            When he went back into his studio space, Genesis and Yuffie were prattling on to one another as if they’d never come back in from the hallway looking ready to tear out someone’s throat.

            “Who was that?” Yuffie asked, and she was busily eating the hamburger she’d brought for Reeve.

            “Mrs. ShinRa,” he said, and gave the fries a longing look.

            “Did you ask her about the catering?” Genesis asked, and handed Reeve the fries with a smirk.

            Reeve stammered, blushed, and snatched the fries away with a frown, managing to get a good two seconds worth of glare in at the other man.

            “She’s on her way,” he told them, and tried not to inhale the fries like he hadn’t eaten in two days…which he hadn’t. “She’s taking me shopping for a sui—”

            Shopping?!” they cried in unison, both of them lighting up.

            “Oh, darling, we must come along!” Genesis said, hugging Yuffie in glee. “Why, we’ll have to get you something fabulous to wear to the opening, Reeve! And Yuffie, darling, you could certainly use a new dress to wear—that tuxedo thing you had on was just ghastly!”

            “In retrospect, you’re right!” Yuffie laughed, and asked, “What color for Reeve, Genesis?”

            Magenta,” the man breathed, and spread his hand out towards Reeve as if seeing an angel in the flesh. “And nothing traditional! He is, after all, an artist!”

            “Uhm, I don’t—”

            “What about blue?” Yuffie asked. “To match his eyes?”

            “I—”

            “His eyes are hazel, you tart!” Genesis said, offended.

            “No, they…” Yuffie peered at Reeve and giggled, “Wow, they sure are!”

            “Look, if you two could ju—”

            “Blue is out of the question, but mustard would be quite lovely,” Genesis mused, still raking Reeve’s form with his eyes, mentally fitting him. “I have a line coming out, Reeve, we could dress you quite nicely.”

            “Everything that comes out of you is a line of some sort!” Reeve fumed, but he was promptly ignored.

            “Oh, darling! This is going to be so fun!” Genesis cried, and clapped in delight while Reeve looked from one to the other with bewildered resignation.

 


 

            Kadaj tossed the numbers down on Tseng’s desk and went straight to the bar, pouring himself a shot with trembling hands.

            “My Jewel,” the man said, giving his required work a cursory glance. “You’re shaking. What has he done this time?”

            He figured it would be Mei Li—he knew the woman had gone straight into Reno’s house, straight to his quarters, and claimed her place there whether Kadaj protested or not. He also knew that Reno would do everything in his power to keep peace between them, but he would never evict Mei Li from his home or his bed.

            And Kadaj wasn’t the type of boy to share lightly.

            “Nothing,” Kadaj said, switching to his home language when he asked, “What do you consider love, Tseng?”

            That paused him.

            Cautiously, he considered the boy’s slender, tense back, the body lithe and sharp as a blade with a wit to match. Ambition, the love and need for power, the inherent greed to be the best, the only…

            “Giving someone anything and everything to make them happy,” he said, and saw some of the tension leave Kadaj’s slim, straight shoulders. “Doing whatever it takes to please them.”

            Things,” the boy murmured, but it wasn’t a question.

            It was relief.

            He turned, fluid and young and beautiful, his jade eyes bright.

            It was so easy to mislead such an ill-used child.

            What did either of them know of love, after all?

            But possession, having, keepingthose were things they knew to their very depths.

            Tseng opened his arms.

            Kadaj filled them.

 


 

            Cloud Strife made his way back to Ifalna’s office once the furor had died down and Reno was long gone. He went in without knocking this time, and plopped down in the same chair that the mobster had been sitting in.

            “I think I may have something,” he said.

            “What?” she asked, wary. “Look, Strife, we’re lucky to have jobs left—we’re lucky to have lives, so I don’t want anymore trou—”

            “He’s blackmailing someone,” Cloud cut in, eyes sparkling. “If I can find out who it is and what it’s over and bring it to press first…Ifalna, don’t you see? What if this has to do with the very President himself?”

            Her wary look gave way to interest and she put down her pen, giving him her undivided attention.

            “What if a mobster is blackmailing our President?!” Cloud wondered, his cheeks reddening with excitement at the very prospect of such a scandal. “If we busted that news out before anyone, then he’d be imprisoned and the President would be brought down before either one of them could react! We’d have splashed the big story and come out the victors before our competitors even imagined such a thing was in the works!”

            Ifalna frowned a little and asked, “How do you know this?”

            “He straight-up told me that he was going to photograph someone in secret,” Cloud told her, grinning. “We all know that he’s behind the biggest prostitution industry in this country, only no one has the balls to say it and the upper-plate upper-crust won’t even consider it to be true. Imagine who all he has access to, Ifalna! Every businessman in this country goes to him for services! Every single politician has spent at least one night at his house and we know for a fact that he has about a hundred people living in that monstrosity! You can’t tell me that every single woman and man living there is for him alone!”

            “What are you getting at, Strife?” she asked, impatient.

            “I made him a deal—I set him up with the right camera, the right angle, the right everything to get what he needs and he’s going to feed me whatever his whores fish out,” Cloud said, leaning back in the seat with a gleeful smile. “And while he’s doing that, I’ll be watching him. When I figure out who he’s planning on doing this to, I’ll be on him like a tick and scoop the goods before he knows I’m there.”

            “That sounds rather dangerous, Cloud,” Ifalna said. “And what makes you think he’ll keep this deal he made with you?”

            “Honor amongst thieves, I suppose,” Cloud said, shrugging. “Reno is a bad, bad man, Ifalna, but we’ve never caught him in a lie. Anyone who has ever dealt with him has always said the same thing—no matter how crude, how cruel, or how frightening, whatever he promised, he came through on.”

            She was quiet for a long, long time before she softly ventured, “Are you sure about this?”

            “Yeah,” he said, folding his arms behind his head and grinning at her. “Whatever I give you from now on is fine by him, and he’s gonna give you a call later to confirm that, so be ready for it. Besides…I owe him now, after that shit he pulled today.”

            Ifalna started to look worried again, but when her phone rang, she answered it.

            Cloud got up and left, smiling to himself when he heard her say, “Yes, Mister Reno, I understand completely…”

 


 

            Yazoo was slightly worried about Reeve.

            He and Rude had gone to the warehouse to oversee the removal of the paintings—which had gone flawlessly, in his opinion—but the atmosphere there had been rather off. Yuffie and Genesis seemed their usual selves, but Reeve seemed oddly down. But then, he truly didn’t eat enough and he did say he was tired…

            “This one, darling, honestly!” Genesis said, holding a suit up to Reeve and giving it a critical look. He glanced over his shoulder and loudly called, “Can I get a tailor over here, please?”

            “Oh, that is an amazing color on you, Reeve,” Yazoo ventured, delighted that Genesis’s taste in odd clothing didn’t apply to others. They’d only been shopping for half an hour and already Reeve was well on his way to being dressed to the nines in a beautiful, charcoal suit. Yazoo had never seen the cut of it before, but Genesis assured him that it was the newest and most stylish thing to come from Rock Island, and the price tag suggested that it was everything he claimed.

            Reeve looked slightly more interested once they’d gotten started, and had actually warmed up to Genesis quite a bit. Yazoo wasn’t sure that they’d ever met before, but he felt secure enough to leave the two men together and go with Yuffie to the dress boutique next door when the young Princess leaned in and cried, “I’ve found the perfect dress for you, Yazoo! Come look!”

            Smiling, Yazoo said, “Genesis, Reeve? Are the two of you fine here?”

            Reeve nodded and gave him an endearing smile and Genesis gave him an absent wave, intent on the pins the tailor was handing him and fussing about hem-length and sub-standard sewing practices.

            Yazoo went through the inside doors to the next boutique and found Yuffie dancing circles with a shimmering, silvery-white gown.

            “Is this it?” he asked, reaching out to feel it. The cool, thin, but weighty material cascaded over his fingers and he admired the sheen of it. “Oh, Yuffie, this is exquisite!”

            The girl held it up with a crow of delight and Yazoo ruefully claimed, “But that isn’t appropriate for the opening, darling…”

            “I had something else in mind,” Yuffie said, grinning that wolfish grin. “You did say you’re having dinner with Reno tonight?”

            Yazoo blushed and glanced over at Rude, but the big man gave no indication that he’d heard anything.

            “Yes,” he whispered, eyeing the dress in this new light. It was low-cut in front, the straps thin and crossed over the low back. Cut asymmetrically, the left side was high and fell in a straight line to the floor on the right side.

            “You would leave him gasping for air in this, Yazoo,” Yuffie said, and gave a dreamy sigh. Her dark eyes sharpened then and she said, “And you never gave me details! I saw FLASH!, by the way.”

            “That was taken out of context,” Yazoo protested, and took the dress.

            Yazoo,” Yuffie said, watching him drape the dress over his front, trying the length. “If you start sleeping with him, you will tell me, right?”

            Gracious, Yuffie! That’s terribly personal!” Yazoo cried, blushing brightly. “Go check on Genesis and Reeve, dear. I need to call my seamstress and pick out a dress for the opening.”

            “Oh, you’re no fun!” Yuffie laughed, and giggled, “You won’t have to tell us anything at all—it’ll be all over your face!”

            She gave Yazoo a wet, smacking kiss on the cheek and dashed off to check on the boys.

            Yazoo laughed a little and shook his head, giving the dress another long, pleased look.

            “Gasping for air?” he breathed, and bit his lip against an excited smile. “I certainly hope so.”


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Fanwork by the fabulous and talented [profile] belatrix_labe (Click for larger view! I will make a special extra post with the full-size pictures)

                    

Reeve, Genesis, and Yuffie                                            Travel To Kalm


 

                         Mirror


Fanwork by the equally fabulous and talented [livejournal.com profile] superkalifragi (Click for larger view! I will make a special extra post with the full-size pic)


The Moment in Kalm

Wow!!!!!!! Thank you !

Date: 2009-04-27 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belatrix-labe.livejournal.com
Thank you for everything!!! For the fabulous chapter and for showing the drawings!
I"M the flattered one here!
Hugs and Hugs dear!

Re: Wow!!!!!!! Thank you !

Date: 2009-04-27 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
I need to throw in my two cents here!

OMG you're an amazing artist!!!! Wow! I bow down in awe and worship!

Great stories inspire great art. You guys supplement each other wonderfully!

Re: Wow!!!!!!! Thank you !

Date: 2009-04-29 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belatrix-labe.livejournal.com
Thank you for your lovely support!
Hugs from Brazil!

Re: Wow!!!!!!! Thank you !

Date: 2009-04-28 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Thank YOU! The artwork is so beautiful and perfect! I'd snuggle you to bits if I could!

Thanks again for everything! I'm looking forward to more artwork if you're willing to give it! YAY!

Date: 2009-04-27 04:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Oh wow, I love sassy, up-to-no-good reporter Cloud! Woohoo watch out Reno! I love the way you created him completely different from "traditional!Cloud" He deserves to be let out to play in new territories, and oh yum, I want more!!!

Your Tseng gives me the sweet shivers! He's all kinds of yummy evilness in this!!!!!

Reeve is just pure win and I adore his sarcasm. If he ever ends up with Gen it will be flying daggers and burning down houses! WOOT!

Yay for Lazard being all cool and totally unimpressed with Rufus on a power trip!

And finally Scarlet... Love her! I can't wait for the confrontation with Elena the Skank! Did you say bitch fight??

OH! And finally YAY for the amazing artwork!!!! Very nice!!!!

Date: 2009-04-28 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Cloud has turned out a lot differently than I had first imagined, but he's starting to grow on me this way, lol! Still, I'm sure he will have some large, life-changing event in the future (I can always use more plotlines!) so he may change yet again!

Tseng and Kadaj will get a little more attention in the next episode along with Zack, I felt like I'd negelected him this time around.

Reeve and Genesis together WOULD be like a house on fire, with all of the accompanying screams for help and destruction and rescue teams, lol!

Lazard was a last-second addition, but I could think of no better contender for snatching away the presidency, so here he is!

The Scarlet Elena fall-out will come, and I cringe to think of it, but Ronald deserves better and Elena has been anything but loving...Bitch Fight Extraordinaire!

And the artwork, GAH! *dies* I love it so much it's obscene!

Date: 2009-04-27 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ldyavalon.livejournal.com
Things are picking up!!!!!!

And gorgeous artwork!!!Kudos to the artists :)

Date: 2009-04-28 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm really glad that you liked the episode and the artwork as well! I'm so stoked they did this artwork for the Soap! I'll have them check the comments for their compliments, and thanks again!

Date: 2009-04-27 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] superkalifragi.livejournal.com
Awww, poor Rufus has it tough, hasn´t he *rolls eyes* Brat... Hah, but at least he´s starting to work. Let´s see how long his spirit lasts^^

You know, it actually startles me to read Yazoo as 'he'. You got me so convinced that he´s really more a 'she'...

I´m glad Reeve has at least one joy remaing with his exibition- with those two pestering him he probably wishes he hadn´t left his former town at all XD Haha, your Genesis likes magenta... Mine too!

I liked the thoughts on 'What is love?'- an interesting topic and you insightfully explored it!

Woah, Cloud goes a dangerous path! I wonder why Reno called again...

I want to see Yazoo in that dress, damn it!

Again, an awesome chapter! Thanks for writing it!

(And again I´m glad you like the fanart. Looking at it now gives me the creeps since I notice so many mistakes...)

Date: 2009-04-28 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Wow, sorry it took me so long to get back to you! Let's see...Rufus is a twat and is likely to remain so for some time, lol! But he's a DETERMINED twat, so we'll see how he does.

I was answering another comment that agreed with yours and I think I've found the reason why I still call Yazoo a "he" and refer to him in male terms when I'm writing it from his view: It's such a huge, deep secret he's had to keep his whole life that I don't want people to forget about it. But the fact that it is startling to readers when I refer to him as male means that I'm doing something right, so YAY!

Reeve with Genesis and Yuffie will almost inevitably end in disaster, but he's starting to get used to their ways and is warming up to his "rapist" (which Genesis will NEVER EVER hear correctly, lol!). Genesis is hilarious fun, though!

Tseng and Kadaj will be exploring some love *cough cough* next episode, just to warn you! And Cloud is feeling pretty smug with his mobster back-up, but he still needs to watch himself!

And I want to see that dress, too!

And don't knock your work! I love every single line of it! And everyone else does, too, so I will thank you once more and beg you draw us all Yazoo in that slinky silver dress!!!!!!

Date: 2009-04-27 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] d0rkgoddess.livejournal.com
absolutely wonderful chapter! Someone STILL needs to smack the shit out of Rufus, but whatever... I adore Yazoo and Kadaj

Date: 2009-04-28 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm really glad that you liked it! The plot is slowly coming together *grasps frantically at anything and everything that could help* so we're about to get our first Major Oh No Moment, lol! Thanks so much for you comment and for reading the soap!

Date: 2009-04-27 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] white-jenna.livejournal.com
Yay, Lazard! *bounces like a bouncy thing* :D
I somehow missed that ShinRa was president of the country as well as the company....
Lol at the magenta line.
I've said it before, but poor, poor Reeve. :D
Thank you for sharing the gorgeous artwork!!!

Date: 2009-04-28 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
YAY for Lazard icon!!!! He looks so sexah and smug in it *squeezes it*!

Yep, Ronald staged a coup in his younger years and is president of both! And Genesis is just all over the place with his silliness! I love him to bits, but at least he really DOES have Reeve's best interest at heart way deep down, lol! And I'm so happy you like the artwork! It's so gorgeous and amazing! I'll make sure they both check the comments for their compliments!

Thanks for the comment, and thanks for sticking with me through the Soap!

Date: 2009-04-29 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] white-jenna.livejournal.com
*pets icon* It is yummy, isn't it? Have you seen the whole picture? http://ani-mama.livejournal.com/137858.html#cutid1
Thank you for cranking this out every week. :D

Date: 2009-04-27 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] f-mystic.livejournal.com
Great chapter! And awesome artwork!

Poor Rufus! I feel SO sorry for him! ahem.

Genesis' original color choices were..interesting. yeah, that's the word. Thank goodness he's found something a bit more subdued! And he noticed Reeve's eye color. *smiles*

I kinda like Cloud as an annoying busy-body. Tseng is still delicious, and I can't wait for Yazoo's dinner with Reno.

As always, looking forward to more!

Date: 2009-04-28 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
YAY! Thanks so much!

Yes, Rufus has it hard, huh? LOL! Lazard will whip him into shape! And you noticed Genesis noticing - WOOT! - you're the first to comment on it, so kudos! Glad you like nosy Cloud, he's going to be pretty important in a little while at the end of Yazoo's storyline. And, speaking of Yazoo, I'm already writing The Scene, lol!

Thanks so much for your comment!

Date: 2009-04-27 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sussurous.livejournal.com
Good episode. I agree with Superkalifragi, everytime I hear Yazoo refered to as a 'he' it stops me short because I see Yazoo as a she in this. Nevermind the plumbing, she's more girly than I am. Also Mei Li is referred as a she and she's got a dick soo.....From now on I'm just going to refer to Yazoo as a she. And I can't wait for her and Reno to get it on!

I liked how Genesis was messing with Reeve by telling him he'd look great in a magenta or mustard colored suit then later on picked a nice conservative one. I thought that was sweet and thoughtful. And when he gave him the french fries to eat I was like Awwwww!

Date: 2009-04-28 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
I've been debating and asking myself why I refer to Yazoo as a man, and I think it's because it is so important a secret to him that I don't want people to forget! But I'm glad that it is shocking when I use "he" or "his" or whatnot, because that means he's really coming across as feminine as he's supposed to! But, by all means, you are more than welcome to call Yazoo she! Won't bother me one bit, lol! And the smut is a'coming, so be prepared, hehe!

Genesis is a hoot, I love him to bits! He's so flamboyant and noisy compared to Reeve's quite nervousness, but he doesn't let Reeve put him off at all! Yes, he talked his usual nonsense about magenta and mustard, but when it comes down to it Genesis knows how to dress and the last thing he wants is for his reluctant future non-consenting boyfriend to look awful in front of a crowd, lol! And the french-fries were a nice gesture since Yuffie pigged out on Reeve's food. At least one of them has his welfare in mind!

And on I ramble! GAH! But, thanks so much for your comment and for reading the soap, it means the world to me that people like it!

Thanks again!

Date: 2009-04-30 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etrix.livejournal.com
"...his reluctant future non-consenting boyfriend..."

Oh LoLs! Now I'm looking forward to this pairing even more.

Date: 2009-04-28 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sephbuttons.livejournal.com
yes, yesss, yess, yessss!!!! The YazzoReno smex is almost here!!!! It is close, I can feel it...

ok, now that 'that' is out of my system, lets continue with the rest of the praises :)
What a great chapter. Lots of development here. Love the relationship between Yazoo and Scarlet. I could see them sitting outside and sippin' tea with their pinkies out in the air hahaha so posh, so lady like. I'm happy for Yazoo.

Still trying to figure out the real motives behind Genesis' constant pestering. Is he really falling for poor Reeve or is Reeve just something of a 'hard to catch' game? I guess I will have to wait and see. I love their interaction though, and the french fries were sooo cute! I just wanted to run and jump into Gen's lap and have him feed me them spuds lol

Oh no Mystery Zack in this chapter but a bit of Tseng/Kadaj. I guess they are suited for each other after all. Perhaps, when Kadaj gets burned, he will realize what true love really means ... sniff for poor Zack :(

About Cloud, I am happy with his character. I thought about it and he is exactly what I had expected him to be in this chapter. I love his 'the public deserves to know' attitude, that is so him. But he is so conniving! I love it!!!! Little bussy body (my dirty mind had few minutes of fun with this thought) can't wait to see how his story evolves (with sEpHiRoTh!!! wink wink).

ohhhh but for now I have to wait till next week for the DATE!!!! aaaack I wanna see the dress!!! and Reno's face when he sees Yazoo!!!

*waiting on pins and needles for chapter 27*

Date: 2009-04-28 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
WOOT! Thank you so much, I'm really happy you enjoyed the episode!

Yes, Yazoo and Scarlet got over the initial awkwardness and are well on their way to being friends! Which makes me happy because it will upset Rufus and that is always a bonus, lol!

Genesis's true motives will be revealed in due time! In the meantime, we can enjoy him driving Reeve bananas, because that is fun for me to write, hehe!

Kadaj and Tseng will get more face-time in the next episode, and I'll get more Zack in there as well.

And I'm glad you like Cloud, he's been giving me fits about things, but he's turned out to be what I need him for at this time. Nothing saying he won't change in the future, but for right now he is Mister Paparazzi!

And yes, there is much smexing to come, lol!

Thank you so much for your awesome comment! I really appreciate it!

Date: 2009-04-28 10:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natila.livejournal.com
great chapter ! A lot of Yazoo in it but I got very very scared for Reeve here for a moment. The thought of him in a magenta suit with a mustard shirt, oh my poor eyes ! :p I am getting more and more fond of silly Genesis..
Funny about the artwork, I found one of the drawings yesterday by chance, searching for recent Yazoo related artwork on DeviantArt (Travel to Kalm)

Date: 2009-04-28 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
LOL! Yes, Genesis had his fun, but Reeve got his nice suit out of it :D And I believe Bela has a DA account/gallery, but I will ask her to see if her work is being distributed without her permission, and thank you for the heads-up on it!

I'm really glad you liked the chapter! I only wish I could've fit Zack in there somewhere!

Thanks again!

Date: 2009-04-28 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neurotoxia.livejournal.com
Reeve should run. Or at least never get into shopping with Genesis alone. This could turn out nasty.

Tseng is the epitome of creepyness but I certainly love that. I'd like to see if the real answer ever comes across Kadaj. Until then, he can wallow in his twisted mind...

The Cloud thing is going to be interesting. I'm wondering if he gets to know Zack once he starts digging deeper into Reno's business. And if Reno knew what little Cloud is up to...he might want to carve Cloud's guts out with a very dull spoon.

Great chapter! :D

And those fanarts are nice, too!

Date: 2009-05-03 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
I missed your comment somehow! I'm sorry! Thank you so much for leaving me a comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the episode, I'm having a lot of fun writing it :D Cloud is certainly playing a dangerous game so he'd better watch out! And thank you for your compliments on the fanart! I'll let them know you liked it all!

And we can only hope that Kadaj will one day undertand love...until then, we can enjoy all the smut he generates :D

Thanks again!

Date: 2009-04-30 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etrix.livejournal.com
I can't believe I didn't comment on this episode before. I certainly made time to read it (as I was folding origami stars... don't ask).

Rufus showing up at the office only to see Lazard sitting in his father's chair. YES! What some people don't seem to realize is that there are always consequences to the actions/decision we make. Rufus seems to be of the 'shit don't stick to me' school of thought. I'm sorry, rich boy, you still live in the world.

Also this line was perfect: “One simply doesn’t call in sick to running a country!” All I could think was Rufus would, if he were hung up enough.

Reeve and Genesis... I'm crossing my fingers for these two. I love the teasing and Reeve's response. I also love how, when it came down to it, Gen picked something that worked and enhanced Reeve. It shows how well he already knows his 'reluctant future non-consenting boyfriend'. *snicker*

Er, does Reeve have his goatee yet, or does he grow it just for Gen? I can't remember exactly, but I don't think Reeve had it in the original game...

Cloud has the light of battle in his eyes so Reno better watch out. Cloud may not be subtle, may not be smart, but he is stubborn and tenacious. Which are probably better traits for a paparazzi than the first two. Definitely liking it.

I am so looking forward to Monday! (Please, Yuffie, don't get drunk at Reeve's opening and puke in the crab dip!)

Date: 2009-05-02 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Sorry! It's taken me forever to get back to you! And unfortunately I can't really reply as I need to, I've gotten some really awful news that is messing with me a little. I'll sum up this way: thank you so much for continuing to read and support the soap! You are one of my favorite writers and knowing you enjoy the episodes makes me work that much harder at them :D I'll try to compose a better reply at a later date and get back to you properly.


Oh, and your Falling Up story has inspired an RP! So, that's pretty cool, huh?! I got super stoked when they brought the idea up, I was like, GAH! That's Etrix's story!!!!

Date: 2009-05-04 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etrix.livejournal.com
Um... RP = role play?

If so, where?

Date: 2009-05-04 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
It's on a forum. The girl who suggested it wanted to use the classification system and said, "I read it in a really great fanfic called Falling Up," and I about died! I was like, YAY! Etrix! I guess she missed your intro disclaimer, because when I told her the classification thing was a nod to Causes Stain, she didn't really know what I was talking about. They are role playing Final Fantasy VIII, Kingdom Hearts, and Devil May Cry characters there under the ABCD classification idea. It's really neat! I hope you aren't upset by it! I didn't mean to, if you are. I will PM you the forum site, if you want to take a look. Let me know if it upsets you, I don't want to cause problems, I just thought you would be stoked to know you inspired a role play :D

Date: 2009-05-05 01:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etrix.livejournal.com
I have no problems with it. I was just curious, plus I realize that it's 99% likely to go in a completely different direction from where I took it; that's the nature of the creative process. Though I'm glad you mentioned Aoi Para's story.

Date: 2009-04-30 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cupcake-clown.livejournal.com
“'His eyes are hazel, you tart!' Genesis said, offended."
<3 I laughed so hard at this, but it helps me to believe that they could be such a cute couple if Reeve would just let himself cut loose a bit. <3 <3 <3 You were a bit worried that the last chapter was not done well enough but I think this one elaborates on things and helps it fit in nicely with the rest! Everything is great! *thumbs up*

I actually commented in the picture post first, since I am impatient ha ha, but I think the pictures are so lovely! Your story just keeps becoming more and more addicting. I become so happy when the next installment is posted! And then when I read through it I get sad, thinking "I read that too fast....now it is over!" ;_; Thank you for the story and sharing the pictures! <3

Date: 2009-05-02 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Sorry it took me so long to reply! I'm glad you like the episode and that you're looking forward to the next :D Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

Date: 2009-05-09 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sphinxofthenile.livejournal.com
OMG, Lazard makes an appearance!!! *squeeee*

Shopping with Genesis has to be the most entertaining thing there is. Poor Reeve can't even get a word out there. =D

Date: 2009-05-12 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Haha! YES! I love Lazard! He gets so little facetime, though! I gotta fix that for him :D

Thanks for the comment! Glad you're still enjoying it!!

Date: 2009-05-14 10:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sphinxofthenile.livejournal.com
Whee, yes, more Lazard please! :D

Date: 2009-07-29 05:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] subcon-ruler.livejournal.com
Seconded what the others said. We can haz Lazard? Please? XD We've gone 10 chapters without him, apparently! XD

Date: 2013-06-12 10:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afuri-kurage.livejournal.com
Finally Lazard is there! And he seems so nice, as if he would babysit Rufus.lol
And Cloud, wow, hes totally the bitch in this chapter xD

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