Episode 27

May. 4th, 2009 10:19 am
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Well, Monday again! And once more I bring you the fabulous drawings by [profile] belatrix_labe who inspires me over and again with her awesome work! Keep it up, kiddo! It's gorgeous!!!!

This week's episode is a bit short, but I'm trying to set the pace for the next one, so I think I cut it ok. I hope you all enjoy it!

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            Elena heard her phone start to ring and dug into her beaded bag for it, brows drawn.

            “I swear, Ronald, if this is you…” she muttered, forced to look away from the runway where some models were showing off the new boutique’s looks.

            The screen flashed ‘Daddy’ and she paled, standing quickly and saying to the manager, “Excuse me one moment, I will be back. Please, just hold on a moment.”

            She hurried into one of the plush dressing rooms and flipped the phone open, trembling.

            Every girl and boy employed by Reno—from his high-priced whores down to his dishwashers—had a number programmed into the phones that Reno insisted they carry at all times. It was always the same screen name, and only one man ever used it.

            “Hello?”

            Laney,” Reno’s lazy, low voice said. “How you been, girl?

            Reno,” she breathed, shaking a little. She sat down on the bench, a little faint at the thought of why he was calling.

            She’d called it quits.

            He wasn’t getting his money.

            Funny thing, baby girl, got a message from the old fart says you’s done with me,” Reno said, and she heard his heavy exhale, could practically see him blowing out smoke from his nostrils with a devilish grin on his gorgeous face. “Zat right, honey? You callin’ it retirement?

            “…Yeah,” she managed, her stomach sinking. She’d been angry, unhappy. She hadn’t thought of what it would mean to no longer be one of Reno’s beauties. No more of his calls, no more of his protection, no more chances to go back to her room in his big, warm house and visit with all of the others.

            Reno laughed a little and asked, “Then why I see you gettin’ big deposits from our boy, then, huh?”

            Christ,” Elena whimpered, suddenly scared. She’d forgotten her comment to Ronald to just put it in her account. Now she was in the unfortunate position of stealing from Reno.

            And nobody ever fucked him over.

            Reno, look, I—”

            Retirement’s one thing, Laney,” he drawled. “But workin’ off my books is something else. You think I don’t keep tracka you, honey? You think I just been playin’ around and not checkin’ up on my babies? I mean, you are one of my babies, right, Laney? You are my girl, aren’t ya?”

            Elena shivered with fear because Reno’s voice had dropped into that slurring, under-plate drawl that meant he was pissed off bad enough to kill somebody, and she didn’t want to die for her temper.

            “Yeah, Reno,” she said, taking a deep breath. “I’m still your girl.”

            You wanna call it quits, Laney, that’s fine with me,” he assured her. “Happens all the time, and I’d wish you the best of it.

            She paled and stared at her own horrified reflection in the mirror across from her when he lowly said, “But there ain’t no room for freelancers in my business, Elena. Old man owes me back-pay for you, sweetheart, and if I don’t get it, then you’re coming home.”

            A day before she would’ve been beside herself with glee to hear such a thing, but that was before she’d bucked his power over her and tried to take a piece of the pie for herself. This was Reno’s table, Reno’s show, and for a second she’d been too secure in her own place with Ronald to remember that even the President deferred to the dangerous redheaded man.

            Because coming home with Reno now would mean going straight to the basement where Reno would kill her without a second thought.

            “I’ll fix it,” she whispered, her prior bravado at his restaurant forgotten. Everything boiled down to living, and Elena desperately wanted to live. It was easy to forget how badly he scared her, easy to pretend that he was nothing more than a rich playboy who’d left his business to his bitch and spent his time at idle play, much like the other “gentlemen” she knew. “I’ll fix it, I swear.”

            There’s my girl,” Reno said, but his voice was cold and hard. “Don’t you ever fucking forget who you’re dealing with. I made you, Elena. Girls like you come a dime a dozen, we clear?”

            “We’re clear,” she said, and the anger started up again, the fury that she was not allowed to be the woman she pretended to be for the world at large.

            Good,” he told her, and hung up the phone.


            “You move so very quietly for a man who constantly bangs a hammer.”

            Zack smiled a little as Mei Li emerged from behind the half-wall which ran the length of the foyer. He’d known she was there, even though she’d been remarkably still. It made him wonder about her, too.

            “Were you trying to surprise me just now?” he asked, tossing his tools down and frowning at the railing that had been torn off last night. The damned drunks that flooded Reno’s house in the early morning hours always managed to break something.

            She smiled at him, her red lips stark in her white-powdered face, using her fan to cool herself. She sat down on the bench next to him and carefully arranged her flowing gown, saying, “No, I do not believe you are a man much given to surprise…”

            “Not really,” Zack admitted, righting the railing, irritated to see that it was cracked. In a house this age, finding suitable matches would require special-ordered wood or else the integrity of the place would be compromised. He doubted that Kadaj would okay such a pricey order, so he settled on patching and wondered why a whorehouse had to occupy a historic landmark home.

            “Does he love you, do you think?”

            Zack paused, staring at Mei Li with narrowed eyes.

            “Who?” he asked, not willing to be led into anything.

            Mei Li smiled and purred, “I imagine it is very dangerous, taking Reno’s lover for yourself.”

            Zack laughed a little and said, “I think it’s more dangerous to take Reno from his lover. I’m glad you’re still alive, by the way.”

            She inclined her head gracefully, smirking at him.

            “I like you,” she said, sounding as if she’d reached a decision. “You are honest and selfless and that is unusual.”

            “That’s a pretty sad social commentary,” Zack breathed, returning to the task at hand. “If it helps, I like you, too, Mei Li. Breaking into Reno’s room and risking Kadaj’s temper makes you the bravest woman I’ve ever met, I’m pretty sure.”

            She laughed lightly and Zack blushed, remembering that she was not, in fact, a woman, but when he grinned at her she smiled back, flattered.

            “Zack,” she said, and his name sounded so odd with her accent, so short and clipped. “Please, take advice from a friend—leave the boy be. There are other interested parties who would love nothing more than to eliminate all competition.”

            Zack paled and paused in his work, equal parts angry and shocked. So, Reno thought he could get one of his lovers to scare him off of Kadaj, did he? He had a lot of nerve to insist on such a thing when he screwed around on the boy so much…

            He gave her a tight smile and said, “It isn’t an issue, Mei Li. You can tell Reno as much.”

            She nodded again, pleased, and purred, “Then I shall. Please, excuse me for disturbing your work.”

            Zack watched her sashay off and frowned, wondering if he’d missed something. But it seemed that where Kadaj was concerned he was always missing something. With a deep, unhappy sigh, he turned his attention to his work, sadly thinking to what mundane tasks his skills were now set, but it was all due to his own error, after all.

            Zack had no one to blame for his life but himself, and he knew it.


            Scarlet met Ronald at the airfield when his small private jet landed, a smile on her face to see him emerge, waving at the waiting cameras. He seemed so much more worn than he had in her memory, tired and slowed by age and responsibility. It touched her to see his plump hand take the railing as he made his cautious way down the steps, to see that hand tremble just a bit. It worried her, and she realized with a start that they were no longer young, either one of them.

            “How are you feeling?” she murmured, kissing his cheek when he neared and took her hand. His own hand shook slightly, and she gripped it tight, walking him back to the limousine, the guards forming a protective circle around them.

            He waited until they were in the privacy of the car and headed home before he gave her a fond smile and whispered, “The specialist will have my results in a few days time.”

            “Ronald?” she quietly questioned, seeing how pale he was, seeing the red rimming his eyes.

            His smile tightened, unhappy and sad, a forced smile that was tremulous and fragile.

            “He…he tells me it won’t be long now,” he admitted, and ducked his head in shame when a frightened tear spilled down his cheek.

            “Oh, Ronald,” Scarlet whispered, and slipped her arms around him in sympathy, crooning to him while he trembled with silent tears.

            “I don’t want to die,” he whispered, and laughed a little, sadly. “There’s so much I still need to do…so much that I have done wrong…”

            He looked at her, his sad blue eyes round with horror, and whispered, “I’m afraid.”

            Scarlet felt her own tears rise with his admission. Gently, she started to rock him, offering the shelter of her arms to ward away his fears, keeping the horror at bay as best she could by holding him as he cried.


            Mei Li spent the day wandering around and talking to the people who lived in Reno’s big house. Never in her life had she seen a brothel this size go unmolested by the authorities, but no one seemed to worry. The House that she herself came from was more discreet by far, and more modest about its occupation. Still, she had to admit that they all seemed happy, content, and well cared for.

            It was more than she could say for some in Dai Jiao.

            She was catnapping when Reno came back in towards the evening, and awoke to him tossing down some sort of package onto a lacquered table.

            “A gift?” she purred, rousing herself to stand.

            “Not for you,” he said, and grinned at her. He dug out a box and Mei Li recognized it as some sort of camera, though not like any she had ever seen before.

            “I have missed you,” she said, ignoring the oddity—it didn’t concern her and he offered no more information about it, so it wasn’t something that required her attention.

            “Where’s Kadaj?” Reno asked, not looking at her. His brows were drawn close and his shoulders were tight. He was concentrating on the camera and Mei Li didn’t care for that. Tseng-shifu had said to distract him, and she would.

            “Do not worry over him,” she sighed, and moved to fit herself to his long, lean back. The height difference put her forehead just beneath his shoulder-blades, but she didn’t miss the shiver that coursed down his spine or the way his skin tightened when she ran her hands around to stroke his belly. “I have spoken to Zack—”

            “Who the fuck is that?” Reno asked, interrupting her.

            “Your handyman,” she said, and got a soft grunt of acknowledgement. “He has said that there is no reason for you to worry, my Reno. He says that there is nothing between him and little Kadaj.”

            “Better fucking not be,” Reno said, irritated and angry. “Didn’t I fire that fucking guy?”

            “Apparently not,” Mei Li said, and giggled her little-girl giggle, the one that never failed to make Reno’s thoughts turn to much more pleasant pursuits. “He had been quite busy all day long mending things for you.”

            That won another grunt, less angry this time.

            “At least he’s good for something,” he grudgingly admitted.

            “Do not worry over him,” Mei Li said, and snuggled against his back, her little hands sliding beneath his shirt to touch the smooth skin of his hard belly. “Mei Li has enough for you to worry over…”

            Reno groaned a little but slid sideways, pulling away.

            Mei Li’s expression slowly darkened to thunderous anger, but he didn’t seem to care.

            “Not now,” he said, and rubbed at his belly where she had touched. “You already tore me up, Mei Li. I got a date tonight, I don’t need to show up for her torn to shit.”

            Mei Li’s eyes flashed with fury and she hissed, “You speak to me so?”

            Reno’s own blue eyes narrowed and he lowly reminded, “I’ll speak to you how ever the fuck I feel like it. When it comes down to it, baby, I’m the fucking top-dog here, and don’t you forget it.”

            “I swear, Reno, that the next time I have you sleeping next to me,” she whispered, and moved to touch his cheek, her voice as dangerous as the anger in her eyes. “I will make you sorry.”

            “You can try,” Reno breathed, smirking. He reached out and roughly cupped one heavy breast, snarling when she hissed and lashed out with those sharp nails. He grabbed her delicate wrists and jerked her close, biting her earlobe hard and harshly breathing, “One of these days, it’s gonna happen.”

            Mei Li smirked and bit his lower lip, pulling back before she broke the skin. She sucked on it briefly and jerked away from him with a smile. In all of the years that she had known Reno, never once had she allowed him to have her the way that she had him. It was one of his greatest frustrations and what kept his interest piqued.

She was no fool. She knew how to keep him hooked.

“Keep dreaming,” she said, purring. She turned her back on him and sauntered away to the bed, stretching out with a soft sigh and telling him, “When she sends you home hard and hot, Reno, I’ll be waiting…and I will top.”

            Reno smirked at her and left her there to go dress


            “Well, you simply must prepare something, Reeve! I will not allow you to appear ridiculous in public!” Genesis informed him, and Reeve eyes his odd clothing—the long, flowing, and deeply colored coat, the net shirt, the black corset, the leather pants bloused into high-heeled boots. Speaking of ridiculous in public…

            “Uhm—”

            “Reeve Tuesti, if we are going to be a couple, you must make an effort!” Genesis declared, rolling his eyes heavenward and lifting his hands, for all of the world at the end of his wits.

            “We aren’t a couple!” he reminded, and wondered how on earth they’d wound up at a restaurant sans the rest of the party. It had happened too quickly for him to protest, but here he was alone with Genesis and the rest of them had gone on about their business. “We aren’t even friends!”

            “Darling,” Genesis scolded, and gracefully seated himself at their table with Reeve automatically following suit. “Dearest, don’t say such things, you’ll break my heart.”

            Reeve’s mouth dropped open and he was about to give Genesis a thorough piece of his mind but the wait-staff were, apparently, on Rhapsodos’s side and conspired to keep him quiet.

            “Wine, please, your best bottle,” Genesis said, sending the waiter on his way before he could even ask. The man leaned onto the table, his chin in his hand, and smirked at Reeve, saying, “Reeve, darling, this is serious business, you know. One false move and they will eat you alive. My only, you simply must prepare a speech of some sort, it is expected!”

            Determined not to be unwittingly drawn into a relationship, Reeve ignored all of the endearments and focused on the facts, saying, “Genesis, I appreciate your concern, but I am an artist, not a performer—speeches in front of strangers are out of the question.”

            Those light, glowing blue eyes narrowed slightly, becomingly lined in a rich, dark brown, and Genesis said, “Reeve, my love, I have dealt with jackals of this sort for many long, many lonely, many dreary years before you came along, so trust me on this. You’re the star of the night, you’re the talented artist—Midgar wants the package deal: talent, looks, and charm. If you fail them in any one of these areas, you will never become vogue. Can we talk about your facial hair?”

            “What?! No! No, none of this matters!” Reeve fumed, and touched his goatee. “What’s wrong with it?”

            “Darling, it’s like a vibrant, hairy Easter egg,” Genesis lamented, pouting a little. “You’ve paint all in it! Do you never comb it, Reeve?”

            Reeve blushed but lifted his chin and said, “Of course I do! And I will not be bullied by a man wearing mascara!”

            “Oh, silly!” Genesis laughed, smiling at him. “It’s a bit late for that, isn’t it? Now, about your speech…”


            Yazoo dropped Yuffie off at a friends, went back to pick up his dress from his seamstress, and headed home in a moil of nervous anticipation.

            Rude, it seemed, was aware of his anxiety, and the big man had offered several times to accompany Yazoo on his outing this evening, but Reno had called earlier and informed him that it wasn’t necessary. When he was with Reno, he was safe.

            As he passed Rufus’s suite he noticed it was oddly silent, and thinking of his husband made him wonder if something had happened. After all, the man had said that he would be gone for awhile on business, yet he’d been home lounging in his bathrobe when Scarlet came to pay her call. It made Yazoo wonder if Rufus had ever left at all, or if he even had a job to speak of now that he’d skipped so much work.

            The excitement of the evening, however, quickly pushed thoughts of his husband out of his mind. He didn’t want to think of Rufus tonight, didn’t want to think that he was consciously going to make an effort to cheat on his husband. For the first time in his life he was going after something he wanted, and the rush of it left him giddy with joy.

            He spent extra time getting ready, making sure every inch of his body was perfect. He chose his corset and stockings with care, settling on a soft transparent color that enhanced the milky whiteness of his skin. His hormone treatments had allowed him to develop a rather womanly shape, which included a slight fullness of his chest. Strenuous workouts had added muscle beneath, giving him the illusion of much fuller “breasts” that were held to advantage by bras specially designed to enhance. With the tight, seamless panties on beneath the hip-length corset and its attached garter clasps, he looked nothing less than fully a woman sitting at his vanity in just his under-things, rolling up one silky stocking before the other.

            He put on everything before he put on the dress—his diamond-drop earrings, his wide diamond choker, even his stilettos. He carefully did his hair and his make-up, paying close attention to his eyes and his full mouth. Finally, finally, he lifted the silky, heavy material up over his head and let it slither down his body, falling into place perfectly.

            Holding his breath, Yazoo turned to look into the mirror and gasped a little.

            He felt oddly unfettered and almost naked in the clinging dress. It was cut lower than anything he had ever worn before, showing the swell of cleavage while still managing to remain tasteful. It hugged his every curve but didn’t show even a trace of his smooth, seamless corset, just outlined the round curves of his hips and cupped the high, firm globes of his round derriere. The short side was on his left, and seemed cut much higher than he’d first thought, falling in a bias cut to his right ankle, and when he walked he flashed an alarming amount of long, lean thigh. It didn’t manage to expose any sign of his stocking, however, so he would blush his way through showing some leg. After all, it was still more modest by far than the dresses most women wore out in the evenings.

            He turned and looked at himself from the back, heart hammering, his eyes wide and excited because he’d made his decision and this dress proved it.

            He wanted Reno as his lover.

            A knock came at his suite door and he jumped a little, hand lifting to his choker. Trembling with sudden nerves, he snagged his tiny handbag and hurried to open the door, hoping that he hadn’t overdone it, starting to believe that he looked ridiculous in the dress instead of breathtaking.

            He threw open the door and Reno came inside, pausing abruptly in his tracks, his smile fading to stunned astonishment as his eyes raked Yazoo from head to toe.

            “I just bought it today,” Yazoo quietly offered, blushing because Reno seemed more astonished than appreciative. “I’m sorry, it really isn’t appropriate, is it? I’ll just change—”

            No!” Reno protested, and a wide, wolfish grin plastered itself to his lean face, a different kind of light filling his bright blue eyes and filling Yazoo with delicious warmth. “No, Cateyes, you look fantastic. I don’t think I’ve ever seen you look so good.”

            “Thank you,” Yazoo murmured, giving him a relieved smile, aware of those blue eyes still traveling over him. He was shy, suddenly, his confidence of moments ago forgotten in the face of Reno in the flesh. He worried that Reno wouldn’t want him. He worried that he was too different for the man to be interested, not sultry enough, not world-wise or sexy. He was up against a whole world full of experienced, man-eating women and he had none of their assurance, none of their knowledge. He only had this aching, keen desire to please and his loneliness to drive him.

            Reno reached out and took his hand, lifting it to his lips to place a long, lingering kiss on Yazoo’s wedding set, those sultry blue eyes on his. He left off with a soft, hungry grin and asked, “You ready to go?”

            Yazoo nodded, speechless with his sudden, overwhelming desire, and let Reno lead him down to the car.


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And here are the beautiful drawings done by none other than the fantastic [profile] belatrix_labe (click for full view)


 
  Kadaj and Tseng
            
   
What If?
                                                                                

 
       
                    Will Reno Fall In Love?

                                  


Date: 2009-05-04 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neurotoxia.livejournal.com
The scene between Reno and Elena was great, Reno's malicious side was perfectly presented. A clear contrast to what is shown when he's with Yazoo.

Zack remains a big miracle and I wonder if that will ever change lol

I feel sorry for the Old Man. Good thing he has Scarlet now, I doubt Elena or Rufus would feel too bothered by him being fatally ill. Maybe Elena would mind the money source run dry.

Reeve is hilarious, I laughed so hard at the "I will not be bullied by a man wearing mascara!”. And Genesis is one persistant son of a bitch lol.


Can't wait to read if Yazoo can overcome his shyness on this date with Reno..

In short: Another wonderful chapter :D

Date: 2009-05-05 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
WOOT! Glad you liked it! I'm trying to remind people that Reno is kinda scary and not exactly as harmless as I lead people to believe :D

Zack's story will unfold a little more, swear it! And I'm glad that people are starting to warm up to Old Man ShinRa, I really did attempt to make him a lovable character.

Genesis and Reeve continue to be a constant source of entertainment for me, lol!

I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you so much for your comment!

Date: 2009-05-04 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Woot two scenes really stood out to me in this week's episode!

The one with Scarlet and Ronald was encredibly heartfelt and sad! That made me choke up and get my cleenexes! I think it is the first fanfic ever where I see Shinra SR. portrayed as a loving and likeable character! Kudos for that!

I love the fact that Scarlet is attracted to him even though he's not exactly catwalk material - it makes it even sweeter that she still sees the man she fell in love with all those years ago, and that she is portrayed as one of the few women out there daring to admit she likes her men a bit more... round. Kudos for that too!!

The other scene I really really liked was Reno telling Elena the skank off! YESS!!! vicious Reno pushes all the right buttons here... But you already know that! XD

Ah forget about the "standing out"-thing. I LOVED it all!!!

Mei-Li surprised me there in a very good way! Zack may have to go figure, but it was nice of her to give him a fair warning! I guess even she can't really deny Zack's likeability.....

GenGen and Reeve.... GAH!!! Love Genesis' persistence in one direction and Reeve's in the complete opposite... Hehe they'll make a perfect, cute, chaotic couple! (if Genesis gets his way...)

Oooh and preeeetty Yazoo!!! Oh dear I wonder how that little venture will go. Reno is practically drooling! I WORRY!

I love mondays for this sole purpose! Otherwise they suck! XD

Date: 2009-05-05 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Haha! You know me so well *evil laugh*! Yes, I'm trying to smash down some barriers - big boys need the luvins, too! Scarlet has her taste in men and her hubby helped her discover that :D

Reno seems all laid back and calm until someone pisses him off for real. Cloud fucking with Yazoo didn't get him like someone fucking with his money did, hehee - he's such a bastard *snuggles him*.

I have NO idea what to do with Mei-Li! My original plan for her is now smithereens so she's just going to have to hang out for a bit until I find another plot-hole to stick her through. I hadn't counted on her being so well liked and I also hadn't counted on the odd dynamic between her and Zack! She DOES like him, and it confuses her but she takes it like it is :D

Genesis and Reeve - don't even get me started! It's like a train wreck, I just can't look away, lol!

Smut is on it's way, oh yes! Mwuhahahahahahaaaa!

Date: 2009-05-04 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ldyavalon.livejournal.com
Am I the only one who feels sorry for Elena??? Coz I do.

And I'd love to see Yazoo's dress, he must look really gorgeous.

And my Zack!!! *huggles him close*

Date: 2009-05-05 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Elena is truly in a tight spot now, and with the reality of it hitting her she has every right of common sense to panic! I'm afraid things are going to change very drastically and unhappily for her, so I hope you're not the only one to feel bad for her! She's a bitch, but she's a person, so thank you for backing her :D

I'm hoping Bela does a drawing of the dress, it would be stunning!! And as for Zacky *huggles him, too*, his story is on its way!

Can't wait!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2009-05-04 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belatrix-labe.livejournal.com
I can't say " thank you" enough for your lovely support!
OMG! It's coming...the Reno and Yazoo love scene!
I'm so anxious waiting for this...It's clear to me see Reno's face drooling for Yazoo.
At each chapter I like more and more Old Shinra and Scarlet and this one was really emotive.
And the enigmatic Mei Li? Every time she appears it's like an aura of mystery and sensuous was flying around this threesome -Zack, Kadaj and her.
About Reeve and Genesis we have a dictate here that says: "agua mole em predra dura tanto bate até que fura".
More or less: soft water in both hard rock hits that broke up.
I really want to see Mr Tuesti broke on Genesis arms...
Thank you again sweety and hugs to bits you!♥♥

Re: Can't wait!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2009-05-05 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
*snuggles Bela* You're awesome! And yes, it IS coming! And once it does there is going to be Renzoo sexing as often as I can work it in :D

Hm, Zack, Kadaj, and Mei Li...you're giving me yummy ideas!!!! I'm glad you like her, Mei Li is fun to write!

And I think Reeve will find himself in a relationship before he knows it, hehee! If I have anything to do with it,that is :D

You're welcome, and thank YOU again! You're the best *snugs*

Date: 2009-05-04 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] white-jenna.livejournal.com
Oh, I was waiting to see what the fallout would be from Elena taking herself off Reno's books. Knew there was going to be some...
I really do adore Reeve and GenGen. :D

Date: 2009-05-05 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Poor Elena, her fallout has only just begun! If she doesn't play her cards very carefully, she's going to end up in some very bad places.

Glad you like Reeve and Gen! They're a treat to play with :D

Glad you liked the episode!

Date: 2009-05-04 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sephbuttons.livejournal.com
Alright, I have to admit I got more excited about Yazoo getting dressed up than I probably should. HAHAHAHA Damn, what a cliffy! now I have to wait another week?!?! By the way, was it me or was this chapter a bit shorter than usual?
In any case, it was good. Love GenxReeve, as always. And I love that Genesis wears mascara :)

I will have to read through one more time after I come back home from work and give you a better review.


p.s. I got inspired by your last chapter and did the silly "Genesis" user pic :P

the fry!!!

Date: 2009-05-05 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jsakurachan1.livejournal.com
omg the fry...that pic is epic...ahhahahahahahahh...*gasping for breath cause shes laughing too hard*

Re: the fry!!!

Date: 2009-05-08 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sephbuttons.livejournal.com
Thank you!! I just love Genesis in this fic and the fries episode was so funny :)
I just had to do the icon.

Date: 2009-05-05 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Sorry! The chapter WAS short, I've been pressed for time and RL has been smacking me like a bitch, but next week's should be more weighty, lol! I'm glad you still liked it, and I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR ICON!!! GAH!!!! *dies laughing* Genesis and the fries, oh, that is hilarious!!!

Date: 2009-05-08 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sephbuttons.livejournal.com
Oh no, no appologies!! I just thought I was getting too excited reading it so it seemed shorter hahaha

Well, short or not, this one was great. It was interesting to see Zack and Mai have some sort of a 'casual chat'. And I see Zack is finally starting to give you some hints to his past :) I'm on pins and needles to find out. However!!! I'm on even bigger pins and needles for the next chapter. Monday is almost here hee hee hee

And, as well, I am all goosey bumps for the epic moment when Seph comes into play - or was that "comes in, to play with Cloud" *wink* *wink*


I think you are a great writer and your imagination is wild. Just reading this soap is giving me the 'push' I needed to start writing my own stories.

Date: 2009-05-12 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Wow, really?! Oh man! That's AWESOME! I'm really very flattered that you would say such a thing, and I'm super stoked to be a part of what has helped you write! *blushes* That is just amazing!!!! Thank you so much! *snugs*

Date: 2009-05-05 12:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sussurous.livejournal.com
I can't wait for next week, Yazoo and Reno out on another date. I hope they kiss. Tell me they kiss.

I love Genesis so much in this. Him and Reeve are so sweet together.

Date: 2009-05-05 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etrix.livejournal.com
Well... that was delicious!

You're developing the story(s) so well that I am, once again, biting my nails in anticipation... well, I would be if I had any nails left from last week. =p

I like how Reno's (very) nasty side pops up every once in a while to remind us of what exactly he does for a living and what he's capable of. It's easy to forget that side of him when he's being charming and funny. I wonder how Yazoo will reacte when/if he sees this side of Reno. Part of me says he'll react with horror but another part says his own family wasn't exactly bloodless so he might be (surprisingly) okay with it. Dunno. I'll have to wait and see if that becomes part of your story, (Dang, there goes another nail remnant!)

Zack and Mei Li. OMG! First Kadaj and now Mei Li. Without even trying that boy has enticed both of Reno's favourites. Forget Zack's past catching up and ruingin his life. If he's not careful Reno will beat everyone to it!

Gen and Reeve made me smile. Reeve is fighting a hopeless rear-guard action and I think he's just beginning to realize it. I like the line about being bossed around by a man wearing mascara, but I especially like Gen's comebadk: "Too late".

I'm not up on the rules for Soaps but surely they're allowed to have one eccentric but stable relationship? I can see Reeve 10 years from now arguing about being in a relationship. "It's not a relationship. He just moved in!" And Gen answering, "You didn't try very hard to kick me out, dearest."

I wonder how being with the very alive and dynamic Genesis will affect Reeve's precise and careful painting style? Interesting...

Good job, as usual. Looking forward to more.

Date: 2009-05-05 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
*give you fake nails* Here, try these, they do wonders for saving my fingers :D

And YAY! That's exactly what I'm trying to do with Reno! He spends so much time with Yazoo where he has to behave that I'm afraid people will forget that he's a mobster-pimp! I'm not sure he would ever risk Yazoo seeing it, but from the way the Jenova's act, I don't think it would even occur to Yazoo to worry or be shocked by it. We'll just have to see :D

Zack and Mei Li are an unexpected development, lol! They really go together well and Mei Li is willing to slip under Tseng's rules and give a warning, and that means quite a bit to someone like her. And yes, if Reno finds out, Zack might be in the Serious Trouble!

Genesis and Reeve crack me up and I'm so glad that everyone loves their little disagreements! You're right, they SHOULD be the eccentric and stable relationship! Because ten years down the line that would so be the case, lol! You're awesome, that whole bit made me laugh just now and I needed that!

I'm really happy that you're still enjoying, and I hope that life is calming down a bit for you :D Thanks again!

Soap...hahahah

Date: 2009-05-05 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jsakurachan1.livejournal.com
first off, when i read the title "soap" i though literally and some very bad thoughts came into mind concerning some of our favorite couples...ehhehehehe....
but as i read i realized you meant more along the lines of soap opera, and so in one sitting have read all 27 posted episodes....
this is amazing! i cant wait for the next installment, though i may need to go buy more tissues since i have been crying (from sorrow and laughter (mainly at Genesis...omg fuckin hilarious)) but until then i will be twitching impatiently for the next!

poor reeve...he is cornered by G with no escape...

OMG CLOUD...ROFLMAO...i can totally see him doing that too...

and denzel and marlene...never thought id hear marlene go off on anyone like she does when thinking about cloud...denzel is hilarious when dealing with drunk rufus...

ttfn, keep up your epicness! i cant wait to see the chaos that will unfold at the gala!!!!

Re: Soap...hahahah

Date: 2009-05-05 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hey, look who's here!!!!! *GLOMPS* I can't believe you read all of them in one sitting, goodness gracious! I'm impressed! I'm really happy that you liked it all so well, that makes me eager to keep writing, knowing that people like it! It has been fun and challenging getting the characters in there and frantically making up plots as I go and hoping I keep the timeline right, etc! Thank you so much, again! I post the Soap every Monday, so that's when you can expect it! LOL! YAAAAAY!!!!

Date: 2009-05-05 05:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nivell.livejournal.com
Wow that pic of Reno and Yazoo is very nice.

Genesis has got to be my most fave character..he's so flaming hawt. Haha!

(OMG I can't believe there is 27 episodes already!!)

Date: 2009-05-05 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Thank you on Bela's behalf! She did a great job, didn't she? *strokes the piccies*

Genesis is rapidly working his way up in my affections, he's just such a CHARMER :D

And I know, right?! 27 episodes, for god's sake! I can't even commit to a favorite pair of shoes but I've managed to keep this going all of this time! It's a miracle, lol!

Date: 2009-05-05 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-elodie.livejournal.com
I love your Reno, Yazoo, Reeve and Genesis to ittybitty bits. I have to say, this is one of the first times I've seen Shinra Snr. given much of a personality at all, so he's intriguing me at the moment.

Zack and Mei Li = ultimate ambiguity dance. My god, the pair of them drive me nuts together. Serious props on keeping Zack such a shady character even now. I've still got no solid idea on what he is. -_-

I love the different sides of Reno. How he's dangerous as all hell, and yet is so careful playing with his Cateyes. Is part of the reason he's so fond of Yazoo the fact that he really is very sweet and niave? I'm picking up some similarities between Yazoo and Mei Li. They're both basically Reno's kink of ladies with penises, and while Mei Li acts cutesy and little girly sometimes, Yazoo actually is very innocent and childish in a way.

Reeve, sweetie-darling, you can't win. Just give up and let Genesis ravage and spoil you. :P

Date: 2009-05-05 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it! Reeve and Genesis are becoming quite the silly and lovable pair! And I'm happy that ShinRa Senior is coming across as a person, I think he was grossly short-changed in the game.

Zack and Mei Li comes up quite a bit, I've noticed! People are really starting to think about the pair of them together! And Zack refuses to let me know about his past. I'm getting rather desperate! I need to know it to keep writing him in, lol!

Reno is very complicated, but his soft spot for Yazoo might well be something even more..but then again, it could be just him looking to get what he wants. After all, he shows none of the same attention to Kadaj, and he's said before that the two of them could be twins. And yes, Reno likes the lady-boys :D But Yazoo hits his buttons because Yazoo was raised female, thinks female, and is basically the embodiment of what Reno wants in a "woman" lol!

And I'm with you, Reeve just needs to let the smut happen :D

Date: 2009-05-05 09:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natila.livejournal.com
"Well, you simply must prepare something, Reeve! I will not allow you to appear ridiculous in public!” Genesis informed him..."

:D haha ! That is just excellent !

And Yazoo... Princess Yazoo ! Why do I suddently get a picture of Barbie Diamond in my head ? ;)
Yazz is just too cute and touching for words, cant wait for the smut ;)
These new drawings look excellent by the way ! I must take a closer look :)

Date: 2009-05-05 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
LOL! Genesis just won't allow Reeve to be less than perfect in public! You know, appearances and all, lol! That superficiality is something about him that I hope Reeve can alter, but we'll see!

And Yazoo is a perfect little princess! *snugs him* And would it be wrong of me to say that I'm looking forward to the smut, too? Heheeehee! All this plotting is for the birds, I write PORN! Haha!

I'll let Bela know you like them! They are so beautiful to me! And thank you!

Date: 2009-05-06 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] superkalifragi.livejournal.com
Heh, first I was confused about the display name saying 'daddy', but now it makes sense XD

Woah, Mei Li really must like Zack to warn him... Shall I start singing 'Love is in the air'? They´d be a strange, but really cute couple I think!

Now I really want to know what poor Ronald is suffering from :(

OMG; Reeve!!! Get out of those clothes, fast XD *has an eye-cancer-causing, very vivid imagine in her head* I might draw that, I didn´t manage to do the Yazoo-in dress-one...

Loevely description of Yazoo and the dress, I had every little detail before my inner eye! She must look stunning.

"He only had this aching, keen desire to please and his loneliness to drive him." - beautiful sentence.

Ack, you can´t just stop there XD *prods you* can we make a deal and re-name friday in 'monday'?

Date: 2009-05-07 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hey, thank you so much, boo boo! I'd love to get ahold of any artwork you'd like to do :D I'm really happy you enjoyed the episode! If I were feeling a little better I would give you a proper reply, kiddo *squeezes*! As it stands I will just say thank you and hope next week's episode is ever better!

Date: 2009-05-09 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sphinxofthenile.livejournal.com
Poor Pres, I've grown to like him and Scarlet too... Of course, now he has some time to make amends, and he will probably try.

God, your Genesis never fails to crack me up inside... he's just so goddamn amusing. Poor Reeve. XD

Reno and Yazoo, they are so awesome as characters. I especially love Yazoo's little mood swings here, it is so typical for his character.

Date: 2009-05-12 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Aw! I'm glad you like President ShinRa! He's actually growing on me, lol! I am sure that when he looks back over his life, he will decide to make some changes before it is too late. Maybe some of those will involve Rufus?

Glad you like Genesis! He's quite a change from the usual, hehe!

Thank you so much for letting me know what you think! I really appreciate you reading and supporting the soap! Thank!!!!!

Date: 2009-05-15 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] f-mystic.livejournal.com
Yummmm!

I almost feel bad for Elena. Almost. But Reno was too damn delicious here for his own good, with Elena, Mei Li, and Yazoo.

Genesis and his endearments! The two of them are a riot together. Genesis pulling one way, Reeve resisting. Silly man; resistance is futile, and you know you want him anyway. And between the vibrant hairy easter egg and the mascara, how do they say these things with a straight face?

Maybe Rufus is sleeping, worn out from actually having to go to work, poor baby.




Date: 2009-05-16 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hehe! Reno is a little delicious, isn't he *noms him*?

And I'm so glad you like Genesis! He's become so dear to me! He and Reeve give me the lightheartedness I need to get through the rest of the plotting :D

I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks for reading!

Date: 2013-06-13 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afuri-kurage.livejournal.com
awh, poor little Mei Li! I really adore him. :3
And I'm dying to see Reno top him! >_>
I think hi- wait, her! and Zack arnt good couple.
Well, mr. President scene's kinda sad. Poor him.
And Yaz, cute and innocent as always

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