A Hard Time: The Visit

[jaded_grin]

So, we have been RPing our little booties off and have more to offer in the ongoing story of Cloud and his two Turks :D We hope you all enjoy this round as much as you enjoyed the other, and please let us know what you think!
Authors: Cloud is played by zilldk , Reno and Rude are played by jaded_grin 
Characters: Reno/Cloud (for now, Rude comes in later again)
Rating: R - you have been warned!
Warnings: Light D/s, man sex, etc. This is purely (almost) porn, people!
Summary: After leaving the room in that bar behind him, Cloud drives ahead, trying very hard not to think too much about what he'd done with Reno and Rude such a short time ago...

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            Cloud’s chest rose and fell heavily with each breath, while he let Reno’s words settle. He watched the beautiful young man before him and took him in, more enticing than ever in his partly undressed state, hips cocked and shoulders casually slumped, smooth, lean body like a lazy cat waiting for a bowl of cream.
            The smile, that undeniably sexy smile that graced Reno’s lips spoke to all the most primitive, carnal desires in Cloud’s body, and he could feel those anticipating eyes roam over him, taking him in, appreciative and cunning. It felt marvelous.
            The order he was given rang in his head like music, and he stepped in to kiss Reno while he let his hands slide up along Reno’s long arms, gently caressing, feeling strong, lithe muscles under the thin shirt he was still wearing.
            As Cloud’s hands reached the collar of the already unbuttoned shirt, he kissed down Reno’s throat while his hands gently slid the shirt down, revealing Reno’s sinewy shoulders and leaving new bared places for Cloud to kiss and lick.
            His hands caressed along Reno’s arms as they slid down, bringing the shirt with them, fingertips like soft silk against smooth skin, and kisses trailing down that firm chest until the shirt lay discarded on the floor.
            Finally Cloud could take the sight of all of Reno’s magnificent upper body in, and he sighed deeply at the splendor of Reno’s beautifully painted body. The Dragon tattoo lured him in, made him continue kissing and licking all the way down, until Cloud once again was on his knees before him.
            Once there Cloud quickly undid the laces of the heavy combat boots, stripping them off and softly stroking Reno’s bare feet. As everything else on Reno’s body they were perfect, smooth and soft and made Cloud linger a little, just enjoying to make Reno relax and feel good.
            After a while he once again slid his hands up along long, slender legs until he was sitting upright at his knees, looking up at Reno, submissively smiling and drowning in that deep blue gaze Reno watched him with.
            It took all of Cloud’s self control to stay calm, to wait and the fire burning in his core made him pant with hardly restrained lust.
            Slowly he reached up and started unbuckling Reno’s belt, playing with the buttons in his pants and occasionally stroking the heavy bulge in front, teasing, savoring the moment, while his own arousal ached painfully from lack of attention.
            But he didn’t touch, didn’t do anything Reno hadn’t allowed him to do, until he finally leaned in and firmly nipped at Reno’s hardness still concealed in clothing with his lips, gently teasing the heavy erection beneath and feeling goosebumps rise on his own skin in anticipation.
            Oh, this was better than he'd dared hope for!
            Cloud just kinda melted into graceful yielding, like he was made for it - and maybe he was, Rude didn't get interested in just anybody, and Reno had certain tastes himself on one side of the coin.
            Those fingers lightly stripped his shirt off, caressing, touching. The look on Cloud's face was just what Reno needed: dreamy and soft, sensual, relaxed. Those lush lips wandered over his skin while those big blue eyes held his, the lids slightly lowered, his expression coy but blissful.
            But when Cloud dropped smoothly down onto his knees, Reno knew he was going to have a more difficult time keeping control of himself than he'd first thought, and he gave a fleeting thought to Rude's own stoic control and how hard that must be...Well, he'd train Cloud a little for the big bear and see how well the man did when his turn came around.
            His breath came out in a rush when Cloud looked up at him with that soft, giving smile on his face, all innocence tainted, all beautiful but broken doll, equal parts naughty and nice, but right now one hundred percent submissive. The way he unbuckled Reno's belt had him quietly catching his breath, trying to hide how excited he was. But there was no hiding the rapid rise and fall of his chest, the gleam of lust in his eyes, the slight parting of his lips to let his rapid breath escape. Cloud's calloused but delicate hand drifted over his straining, cloth-covered cock slowly, teasingly, lightly so that Reno's back arched a little, his hips pushing against Cloud's hand.
            And then those pearly little teeth nipped the aching head of his cock through his pants and Reno's breath exploded out of him in a startled, sudden moan of pure bliss.
            He reached down and buried one hand in Cloud's spiky hair, finally managing to gasp, "All the way, baby, that's it. You little tease, you wantin' some punishment, huh? I got everything you need right here, Cloud, just take it all off like a good boy..."
            His cock throbbed in delicious pulses, pushing against the confines of his pants, straining to escape, to meet Cloud's velvety lips skin to skin and feel the hot pulse of his breath.
            Reno moaned softly again and gave Cloud's hair a sharp, brief tug to make him mind, already in bliss from his docile behavior, already anticipating how amazing it was going to be when things got a little more interesting.
            Cloud practically purred when Reno tugged his hair sharply to get him back to business, and he was more than happy to comply.
            Slowly, ever so agonizingly slowly he undid the zipper in Reno’s pants and started to tug a little, just enough to make room for that gorgeous cock to pop out into free air.
            The sight of the flushed, straining erection already leaking precum peeking out from the open fly, looking so tasty and practically begging to be licked…. It made Cloud growl hungrily and had him licking his lips in a completely obscenely sexy gesture of anticipation.
            Before he started pulling the pants all the way down, he just had to taste it, and slowly he tugged at the pants just a little to expose Reno’s balls as well. The sight made Cloud drool and he leaned in and slowly, ever so slowly, let his tongue trace all the way from the bottom of Reno’s sac and all the way up the thick length of his cock to the head, letting the tip of his tongue tease at the slit, licking up the delicious precum there.
            The taste and the delicious smell of Reno’s purest essence made Clouds head swim, and as he parted his lips wide and took the head into his mouth, he gently tugged the pants the rest of the way down, leaving Reno completely nude.
            While suckling on the fat head he let his hands tickle all the way up Reno’s long, slender legs, and when he was ready he relaxed his throat completely and went down, taking Reno’s delicious cock all the way in to the balls, all the while his hands settled in a firm grip at Reno’s delicious buttocks.
            Reno's eyes swept nearly all the way closed as a shudder of pure pleasure coursed its way up his slender spine, set off just from the sight of Cloud so hungrily licking his soft, full lips. He looked so eager for it, so ready that it made Reno's head spin a little with amazed delight.
            He let his head tip down a bit to better watch Cloud move, to see the young man pull his flushed and ready cock out, to watch him pull his pants down to fully expose him from mid-thigh up. The slow, decadent way Cloud closed his eyes and teased his hot tongue up from Reno's balls to the tip of his cock had him rocking forward, panting softly, his hand loose in Cloud's hair.
            He murmured encouragement to him, breathed soft words of lust and need that Cloud probably couldn't even hear - it was just Reno's way, his need to be constantly talking, active, involved. He prayed for patience while Cloud's tongue tasted him, probing the head of his cock, wrapping around the wide head and teasing him. Reno's pants hit the floor in a soft rustle of cloth, pooling around his bare feet.
            "...ohfuckthatfeelsgood..." he whispered, eyes closing fully when Cloud sucked on his head and those hands tickled up his thighs to trail around and cup his backside.
            Cloud shifted a little and Reno bit his lower lip when the man sank all the way down to the base, encasing his aching cock in warm, wet heat, in tight, constricting flesh. Cloud's tongue worked against the heavy vein along the underside, his teeth providing an agonizing and amazing amount of friction.
            "Keep it up and you'll get yourself a facefuck," he warned, and opened his eyes again, taking deep, even breaths to keep the pleasure at bay. Air dragged into his lungs and pulsed out again, and the blood surged into his swollen cock, stiffening him even more down Cloud's tight throat. He pulled harder on Cloud's hair to control his head and thrust into his mouth two times - only twice or else he'd already be spurting down the man's throat - just to give him a taste of a facefuck. "You showing your skill, Cloud? Show me what else you got, baby. I'll let you suck my cock, but you stop when I tell you 'cause I swear if you make me cum before I want to there's gonna be hell to pay. Right now we're playing nice, 'cause you're new to me and I don't want to overstep things, but don't think I won't pull out all the stops, baby. You go ahead and taste, go ahead and see what you're getting into, Cloud, 'cause in a few minutes I'm gonna see how much you like getting spanked. Whatchu think of that, huh?"
            Reno’s words sank into Cloud's mind, all the way into the core of his soul and set a fire to burn there, brighter, more violent than any before. His breath hitched as a delicious internal battle broke out, struggling between rebellion and submission.
            Part of him refused to give in, urged to fight, to make a stand, like the Hero had done. But the other part – the part that was essentially Cloud – longed for it, yearned so much to give in to Reno, play this out and surrender. The surging fire within almost hurt now, and it was the sweetest pain Cloud had ever felt in his life.
            The muscles in his strong thighs were straining, working, evidence of the strong warrior sitting here on his knees before an even more dangerous creature, licking, sucking, worshipping Reno’s throbbing cock. He was still panting from the forceful thrusts into his throat, and the mere thought of an actual facefuck made his mouth water.
            The thought of Reno spanking him, really doing it, made Cloud growl in his throat as he looked up at the man above him. Gods, so beautiful. So deliciously sexy and the hunger, the unrestrained lust he saw in his eyes as he looked down at Cloud made Cloud’s entire body tingle.
            And then that rebellious little spark in Cloud lit up to have it’s say.
            "I think… You talk too much", he purred playfully, eyes flashing green, pupils slit. Rebellious and yet pliant as he slowly let his tongue swirl teasingly along the head of Reno’s weeping cock in a clever display of obvious skill for Reno to enjoy.
            He felt an almost irresistible need to know just how far he could push it. He wanted to see the predator in action, wanted to let Reno know that Cloud still had that rebellious spark, that he needed taming, but like Reno had said, he didn’t want to take it too far. Not yet.
            Cloud’s blood was boiling, the ache in his groin unbearable now, and the arousing tension in the air – Reno’s dominant nature, demanding and dangerous, the warning tone in his voice efficiently reached Cloud’s naturally submissive demeanor that had been dormant for so long.
            Cloud would willingly give his soul for this, and Reno pulled all the right strings to get it.
            "Oh yeah?" Reno asked, laughing breathlessly. He pulled Cloud's mouth off of his hard cock, grinning at the sight of that beautiful face so full of impish delight. He couldn't help but grin at him, knowing that Cloud was deliberately pushing, testing the boundaries, seeing what he could get away with. Reno had done the same thing with Rude, and when the smack-down had come, gods had he ever enjoyed it. "I'll show you talk too much, you smart-ass."
            He hooked his free hand under Cloud's arm, stepped out of his discarded pants, and tossed the smaller, slightly heavier man onto the couch on his back.
            Cloud's hazy eyes flickered again, blue then green, shifting and changing, but the sensual expression on his face never did. He lay where Reno had tossed him, knees spread, his muscular body relaxed, that slight ornery smile on his gorgeous face. The swollen, thick meat of his cock stood up stiff against his belly, large and luscious, glimmering with welling precum. His tight balls were bared by the way he was laying, and Reno had never seen anything as sexy in his life as what he saw in that moment - Cloud Strife, Hero of the World, laid out like a feast for Reno alone to enjoy.
            "Mouthy little fucker, aren't ya?" he breathed, and leaned over to plant his hand in Cloud's firm chest, telling him, "This here's a test, Cloud. How long can you hold still? How long before I have to get something and tie your ass down? Maybe you can make it the whole way through, I don't know. But we're gonna find out now..."
            He slid his free hand down Cloud's rippling belly and skirted the length of his straining cock, fingertips swirling to cup his full balls instead. He caressed the hot flesh, rolling them gently, and then brought his hand down in a sharp slap against Cloud's inner thigh.
            "You didn't think I meant spanking your ass, now did you?" he laughed, and slapped him again, a little closer to his balls, going back for another round of rubbing and teasing. "Ass is last, baby - so every time I shove my cock inside you, that sweet little bottom screams for mercy."
            He slapped the soft skin where leg met the crease of his groin, watching Cloud's cock twitch and pulse, watching the play of emotions on his face.
            "You want me to keep going, Cloud? Want me to spank your balls, that pretty cock of yours?" he purred, teasing his balls again, letting his fingers slip down to rub against Cloud's tight little opening. "You want me to make it count? Beg for it, then, baby. Let's see which one of us talks too much."
            Cloud couldn’t take his eyes off Reno as he stood there, towering above him, controlling, dominating, challenging… He made Cloud want to reach up, to pull him down and kiss him like there was no tomorrow. He would wrap his legs around Reno’s slender hips and beg him to fuck him, to do something. Anything
            The first smack shocked Cloud’s system, caught him completely by surprise, spreading delicious warmth in his thigh and for an instant had his urge to defend himself flare in his mind. It was pure habit, his body used to reacting on any physical threats, but the pleasure of it overpowered it and turned instinct into lust.
            The second slap made Cloud gasp as his cock twitched from the delicious waves of sweet pain radiating from the sensitive skin. The danger of Reno’s hand slapping that close to the most sensitive part of his body was already making Cloud burn, and the look on his face left no doubt about how much Cloud enjoyed this.
            Danger combined this closely with pleasure made Cloud squirm in delight, and as Reno slapped him the third time Cloud couldn’t hold back a deep moan, wanting to be hurt, to be punished for pushing Reno into doing this to him.
            Reno’s nimble hands made Cloud want to scream from the delicious sensations of having his balls so thoroughly teased and when he felt Reno’s finger start teasing at his opening, Cloud more or less squirmed, as purring noises made their way from deep within his throat.
            This time he couldn’t keep from trying to reach up, to try to pull Reno down. He needed to touch, to have more, and once again rebellion flared in his eyes.
            "You want me to beg, Reno?" he gasped, breath heavy, face contorted with desperate need. "You’ll…" His voice was shaking with unrestrained desire now. "You’ll have to do better than that!"
            It was thin, but he refused to give in just yet. But oh Gods, he wanted to beg. He wanted to feel Reno’s hand deliver such delicious pain, such unrestrained, marvelous pleasure! He wouldn’t be able to keep this up for long!
            "You’ll have to do better than that!"
            Reno laughed, giving his own cock a quick stroke to ease the ache. Cloud sure was something, alternately sassy and submissive, yielding but demanding. He had Reno hot enough to blow, and he thought about how hard he'd cum just jerking off over Cloud's washboard belly...
            His cock pulsed hard and he took a deep, calming breath, willing the pleasure to subside.
            "Baby wants to play," he purred, and both hands returned to Cloud's body as he ran his tongue up the long, muscled expanse of the young warrior's belly. "Don't want to beg like a good boy? Reno's got something for that, Cloud, don't you worry..."
            He leaned down and sank his teeth into the skin around one pert, perfect nipple, shivering to think of how sweet it was going to be to take his belt to that flawless, creamy white ass and watch it redden, watch Cloud writhe and wriggle, hear him moan. But that was later - right now he wanted to get the young man ready to play for real. He sucked on the soft, sensitive skin for a few more seconds and finally turned his attention south. With a lazy, sultry smirk, he teased one finger around Cloud's ass again and slowly slid one slender finger inside of him, probing lightly and sliding back, barely penetrating him, barely rubbing against the small swell of Cloud's prostate.
            His other hand cupped Cloud's balls once again and then he brought that same hand down sharply on the full bulge he'd so gently caressed, smiling when Cloud's body jerked, his fat cock twitching again.
            "Alls you gotta do is beg, Cloud," he purred, and eased his finger in with more force, keeping up a constant, light massage of Cloud's sweet spot while his other hand rained cautious slaps down on the young man's reddening balls. "Just beg me to touch you, tell me you'll do anything...Beg me like a good boy and I'll spank that gorgeous cock of yours, roll you over, and take my belt to that pretty ass. You want that, Cloud? You want me to whip you up a little and fuck you hard right after? Hm? Beg for it, baby, let me hear how much you want me."
            "Hnnngh…"
            Cloud muttered and moaned through gritted teeth as Reno’s words rung inside his head, promising heaven and hell, pleasure and pain, all the while Reno’s overwhelming presence, his unquestionable dominance ruled every part of Cloud’s body and soul.
            The feel of Reno’s finger mercilessly massaging the tingling bundle of nerves inside him while he cruelly, oh so deliciously cruelly slapped his tender balls, sent waves of white lightning through his body, completely deriving Cloud of the ability to think, to struggle, to keep his resistance up.
            It was too intense, almost at the brink of insanity. He couldn't think straight, couldn’t even form a coherent sentence.
            Oh gods it felt so good! The pain, the pleasure, all of it mingled into a sea of lightning and sparkling colors, leaving Cloud shuddering in raw, unrestrained wanton need, hips bucking up at their own volition.
            …Oh gods, oh gods, more! Justalittlemore...
            Cloud arched his back, his head tilted back to expose his long, beautiful neck to the dangerous, beautiful man above him, eyes closed and only the most obscene moans escaped his lush, moist lips,
            The muscles in his strong, firm body were straining from the exertion, and as a testament to the desperate need that surged through Cloud’s body, his fingers were buried deep in the cushions of the couch. Cloud’s neglected cock were weeping precum that puddled in the ripples of his taut belly, and the heat and sweet torture of his reddening sac made his entire groin burn.
            "Please... Reno..." Cloud struggled to resist, wanted to fight, to rebel against surrendering but at this point he knew it would be in vain. There was no turning back.
            "Please hurt me!"
            Reno uttered a breathless little laugh of relief to hear Cloud so wantonly moan, “Please... Reno... Please hurt me!"
            "That's right, baby, I'll do you up right, all you had to do was ask," he said, his voice tight with need. Cloud was just too beautiful, too perfect! Reno had a pretty good estimation of himself, mostly thanks to Papa Bear's hard work, but he never dreamed he'd ever touch a work of art like Cloud Strife. The long line of Cloud's vulnerable throat was bared for his teeth, his strong chest heaving with ragged moans and pants, his belly tight and taut beneath the heavy weight of his cock. Gods, he was too beautiful, from the tips of his spiky blond, sweaty hair to the tips of his delicate, curled toes. "Begging is the hardest part, Cloud - sometimes asking for what you want is harder than anything else."
            Rude would teach Cloud the true meaning of the word honesty, oh yes. It had taken Reno years to learn that it was okay to beg, okay to ask for what you want and need instead of waiting on other people to guess it, and from what he'd seen of Cloud tonight he knew that the man needed a lot of care where that was concerned. Cloud was one closed down, disengaged shell, that was for sure, but Reno and Rude would straighten him out.

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Comments

[ldyavalon.livejournal.com]

zfejfkjdsnfslfnsdkf!!!!!11!!!

*has lost all higher synapsys responses*

*reboot in 3...2...1...*

[beruthiels-cats.livejournal.com]

*points up* what ldyavalon said!

[sildil]

Agrees

[aikonamika.livejournal.com]

Fourthed.

*gives the Bukkit o' Brain a cautious look* I think the bukkit melted a bit.

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

GAH! I can't remember who I replied to! I think you ALL are getting this, lol! We even melted your bukkit?! Sorry about that! *hands you new, reinforced one* We'll try to make it up to you :D

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

*Goes to buy brand new bukkit and hands it over*

Sorry for my far too late response this time!

And I'm so glad we could even melt the bukkit a little! :D

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

Haha! This chain thing you guys got going is hilarious! *snugs it* Zill and I are so glad you liked it!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

*is embarassed for being this late to reply*

Thanks! We aim top please, and it seems like we did! XD

[ffvii-4-ever.livejournal.com]

What they said. . .

*falls over dead.*

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

*Is far too late to revive, I'm so sorry, but hoping you made it none the less*

Glad you liked it! Part 3 is up - hopefully it will sweeten the afterlife for you...

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

Thank you, lol! We're glad you all liked it!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

Sorry for being this late in my reply!

But thanks so much! We loved writing it too!

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

Hehe! Thank you so much! :D

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

OMG I'm so sorry for being this late to reply to your comment!

Thank you so much for your lovely incoherent comment!

I hope the re-boot worked! (And is kinda proud we caused it!)XD

[ldyavalon.livejournal.com]

Brain more or less rebooted ok. i needed it for the soap on mondays so I told it to hurry up :P

[lady-hedge.livejournal.com]

Oh my - *dies*

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

EEK! *revives* Sorry about the death! It was accidental, we both swear it! :D We're glad you liked it!

[lady-hedge.livejournal.com]

Beautifully. Ha though my icon is contradicting my statement.

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

Oh my, I hope the revival helped since I'm so late to reply!

Thank you so much! Death by porn isn't the worst way to go now, is it? XD

[lady-hedge.livejournal.com]

Definitely not. It's the equivilant of *sweet death!

[d0rkgoddess.livejournal.com]

...... I'm going to be unoriginal and just point upward... cause... uh.... *leaves a puddle of drool*...

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

*gets mop* YAY! We're so happy you liked it!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

So sorry for being this late to reply, but thanks for your lovely comment!

Unoriginality is not a bad thing at all, especially not in this case! Thank you so much!

[f-mystic.livejournal.com]

You've already mushy gooped my brain that zilldk's been having fun playing in, and now this?

Evil, I tell you. Evil. Teases.

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

LOL! Who, US?! Nah! *evil giggles*

Glad you liked it! There's more coming!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

Hehehe sometimes it's just fun to be evil! XD

Pokes stick again in somewhat dried up goop since it took me so long to reply. Sorry about that and thank you so much for your lovely comment!

[f-mystic.livejournal.com]

You really enjoy that far too much!

I appreciate every moment of your "evilness" and look forward to more. In fact, I think I have some catching up to do!

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

Hey, hiya! I've missed you! Glad we could reset your brain for you :D We try our best! Thank you so much!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

Thank you so so much, and sorry for me taking this long to reply!

Rude will be back, no worries there, and we're happy that you found him hot! He plays a very important and central part in this whole thing, so YAY!

Stay tuned for more Rude in the future and thank you so much for your lovely words! *is very proud over the masterpiece-comment!*

[elflover59.livejournal.com]

" So Hot"

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! Zill and I are really into this RP, it's gone well so far, and we're really glad everyone likes it! Thank you so much!

[elflover59.livejournal.com]

You guys are great.:)

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'm really sorry about taking this long to get back with my reply to your lovely comment!

We're both really happy that you like it! This series is our baby - we love our boys...

[elflover59.livejournal.com]

Oh i love them too. There are not many stories out there with all 3 of them together.:)

[garinarayne.livejournal.com]

Meep.

*stares blankly at screen, swallows hard*

Meep.

Teases! More? Soon? Please? *offers triple choc cookies*

(after attempting to reboot brain for 10 mins) The amount of character depth and development you manage to include in smut is truly impressive, and adds to the overall hotness. Glad you have power back, jaded_grin, roughing it isn't my cup of tea either. Anxiously awaiting next part :)

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

*noms triple choc cookies* Coming right up! We aim to please! And god, me too with the power thing! *happy sigh* I am NOT a pioneer woman, by any means! And thank you so much again! We're both really flattered that you think so highly of this! We DID put a lot of effort into the characters, so we're really happy it is making a difference! Thanks again!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

First of all sorry for taking this long to get back to you. there's really no excuse for it!

Triple choc cookies! *noms*

*is exceptionally proud of your comment about the character depth.* That is just a HUGE compliment! Thank you so so much! I'm glad we made them seem like more than just hollow characters having sex. We both enjoyed writing it so much!

[rosi-doll.livejournal.com]

Guh.

...

*bleeding out from the nose*

And to think I was stupid enough to give blood before reading this...

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

*hands tissues*

Sorry! *giggles* We're so glad you liked it! There is more to come! Thanks again!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

Oh noes, I hope you have been able to regenerate blood by now! Sorry for being this obscenely late in replying to you!

Thank you so much for commenting. We're so glad you liked it!

[tenxxxryuko.livejournal.com]

Tease, tease, you guys are such TEASES!

*Dies from hot-ness overload*

Elena: *gives me phoenix down* Don't worry, you don't have to save anyone this time

Me: *woozy from being reborn and reading fanfic* I'm getting a Dead Brain Bucket now. Really, between you two, etrix, amarissia, and lilymoon my brain won't live for very long.

Oh gods, COCK spanking?! I thought the one in Kaboom was hot but this one...Oh GREAT GODDESS!
*gooey brained*

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

Heaven have mercy am I ever late! I'm so sorry, usually I'm timely with responses *blushes*!

Thank you so much for you kind comment! We are really glad you enjoy it! *thanks Elena for helping out with the deathness*

Haha! We are thrilled to be included with the likes of the authors you've named! I know I'm a fan of all of them, and Zill is, too, as far as I know!

And yes, cockspanking *blushes again* I can't seem to stay away from it :D

[tenxxxryuko.livejournal.com]

Psha, if you're late, then I'm BEYOND late replying to you! *bounces* I'm not being kind, just telling you the honest truth, ma'am! *gives a silly salute while staring silly-ing-ly at the hotness above*

Elena: *nods at jaded_grin* She's a handful, but I think her enthusiastic-ness makes her bounce back.

Tseng: *came passing by and is reading it* ...I'll keep this as reference material.

Me: *snickers* And I thought you stopped the process of keeping sharp objects in your pants Tseng-love.

Tseng; *raises eyebrows, goes to bedroom dragging Reno* Excuse us.

Reno: Hey, like, what the fucking hell, yo! Oi, Tseng! It's already bad enough I SLAPPED fucking Strife's COCK! Do you know what Zack and Sephiroth wanted to do to me, yo! LET GO OF ME!

Me: *Humming and cackling*

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

Oooh my, to be named between those awesome writers..... *dies* That is just the greatest compliment ever!!!!

I'm so so sorry for being this late in replying to your lovely comment! I'm glad Elena took care of the reviving!

And yeah, cock spanking... hehe, I know Cloud loved it....

Cloud *glares* "You just HAD to blurt that out, didn't you?"

Me: "Yeah. Sorry. It slipped..." *giggles*

[tenxxxryuko.livejournal.com]

*laughs* *revives zilldk* You deserved it! Nice to know that I won't be late replying your comment, though! I was BEYOND late replying to jaded_grin's! Real Life decided to come back to me. *winces* But it's all good!

AND COCK SPANKING SHALL BE A SMUTTY, SMEXY SPORT ONE DAY!

Cloud-muse: Oooh, so your Cloud likes cock spanking zilldk? Hey, hey, zilldk's Cloud, what does cock spanking feel like? Seph's too overprotective of me to hurt me right now, but I managed to convince him to bite till I bled! And that felt really good! Does cock-spanking feel even better?!! *bouncing on heels all giddy*

Me: Dang, ever since amarissia's Choir!Cloud gave him pervert lessons, Cloud-babe has turned into a little minx! Aw, my baby's all grown up! *laughs*

[lady-elodie.livejournal.com]

*purrrr* Please oh please, do continue asap.

[jaded-grin.livejournal.com]

*is mortified by how late she is*

I am really very truly honestly sorry! But to make it up to you, there is much more to come! And thank you so much for your comment! Zill and I both are really happy you like it!

[zilldk.livejournal.com]

I'm so so sorry for replying to your comment this late! It's inexcuseable!

But thank you so much for commenting! We're so glad you like it and I'm sure you already know part 3 is up!