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If you're new to the series and you want to start at the beginning, hit The Hard Time Series tag on the side column and scroll down, I've kept it all organized for a change, haha! Info for those who don't know:

Authors: Cloud is played by [info]zilldk , Reno and Rude are played by [info]jaded_grin 
Characters: Reno/Cloud/Rude sandwich in that order
Rating:
R - you have been warned!
Warnings:
Light D/s, man sex, etc. This is purely (almost) porn, people!
Summary: Cloud spends the night with the Turks and has to go back to deal with reality. Not fun, for reals.
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8

            Reno…I love you…”

            The words were whispered so soft and gently, shy but still unmistakable, and Cloud held Reno tighter after this admittance, burying his face in Reno’s flaming hair.

            After a little while Cloud looked up into loving, brandy-colored eyes with his heart hammering in his heart, still holding Reno close but also realizing that Papa was there, and not in the least feeling anything less strong towards him. It amazed him that it was possible, that he could love two men so equally strong, so different and yet the same strong love rooted deep in his soul.

            The feelings swelled in Cloud’s chest, made his stomach flutter and his smile to widen into a bright, shining light. Rude knew already, that Cloud didn’t doubt. And he knew that Rude had held himself back for the sake of his two boys, and after lingering a little in Rude’s calm, loving gaze he reached out with one hand towards him.

            “Papa?” he whispered, not a question, but a sweet whisper to let Rude know that he was aware, and that he was ready to do anything Rude might want to get his own release. Cloud kept his hold on Reno with no intentions of letting go of his exhausted, lithe body, but he would offer whatever he could for Rude to take if wanted it.

            Cloud was still aroused from the second ‘awakening’ but it was not uncomfortable in any way and it wasn’t his own needs he was concerned about now. He had been satisfied to a degree that rose above anything he had ever dreamed of already, both physically and mentally, but he knew their Master had held himself back and he wanted to offer something in return.

            Cloud’s eyes were full of love and admiration as he let himself get swallowed up by the glowing amber orbs that met his gaze, and he smiled again, letting the wonderful feelings of being needed, of being important and loved swallow him up fully.

            Reno shuddered as Cloud whispered that soft admission. Love, and all that came with it. None of them could have foreseen it coming so quickly or so strongly, but love knew no rules – it could happen over the course of years, like Reno felt for Rude, or over the course of a moment, as Rude had known when he'd first laid eyes on Reno. Everyone was different, and it was no less true for the length of time. And Reno was afraid, because he knew he loved Cloud, too. As amazing as it was to realize it, there was no denying the intensity of what he felt for Cloud.

            He wanted to say it back, but he couldn't. Even Rude rarely heard it except in that teasing, casual way of saying, "I love you, man," when Rude did something funny at work or pulled a stunt that made everyone gape at him in awe. When Reno did say it in the way that meant something, it was a whisper, a breath, a shy sigh uttered in Rude's ear in the darkness of their bed when he was safe in Rude's arms and willing to expose himself. And even then, it was a rare, rare thing. So he tried to make up with his body what he could not provide with his fractured emotions.

            He clung tightly to Cloud, burrowing against him, snuggling to him, trying to convey through flesh what he could but rarely say aloud. He cuddled close and felt Rude's strong hand petting them both, felt the comforting crush of the big man's body near him. When Rude started to lift him up and off of Cloud, Reno curled against it, resisting, wanting to stay close. His big lover seemed to know that he was feeling adrift, so he just managed to wrangle Reno down next to Cloud as opposed to right on top of him. With gentle, loving hands, Rude stroked their bellies, and then moved to gently part Reno's legs. Kneeling between them, he bent and placed a soft kiss high on the inside of Reno's inner thigh, breathing, "Papa loves his Reno," and chuckling over the pleased mewl of surprise he won from his lover's wet lips.

            Moving to Cloud, Rude did the same, breathing, "And Papa loves his Cloud, too."

            He lingered over the gentle kiss, tasting the salt of Cloud's skin, the metallic sharpness of seed. Drawing back, he stood, looming over them both, and said, "To me, boys. Come undress your Papa."

Cloud felt all tingly inside after the kiss, the Good* Boy’s* kiss! No words could describe the feelings inside him at this moment, and the sight of Papa standing there above them made Cloud’s knees go weak and his heartbeat to rise.

Reno was snuggling so close beside him, and very gently Cloud stroked his hand up along his belly and chest while he leaned in and gave him a tender kiss.

“Come, Reno, we need to take care of Papa,” he whispered, smiling and looking into Reno’s beautiful eyes while he stroked his hair away from his face. “He needs us now.” He kissed Reno again, and together they got up on their knees, taking in the sight of their Master above them.

Cloud felt excited shivers run down his back as he moved close and got up to stand so he could step close to Rude and gently start to unbutton his neatly tugged shirt. As soon as he had bared just a little dark skin Cloud leaned up and placed a kiss on each of Rude’s collarbones before he continued with the buttons.

He tried to make every move a little bit seductive, a little bit enticing, working over Rude’s hard chest with a flat hand, stroking and caressing all that gorgeous muscle beneath the white shirt. Slowly Cloud moved around Rude to ease his suit jacket off of his shoulders and neatly put it on the hanger on the wall before he went back and continued with the shirt, every move slow and enticing. He wanted to worship his master, and he put his whole heart and soul into undressing that gorgeous muscled hunk of a man.

When all the buttons were done, Cloud parted the shirt so he could lean in and place soft, loving kisses all over Rude’s strong chest and firm, perfectly ribbed belly before he moved up again and let the tip of his tongue dart over one tight, dark nipple. And as he gently sucked the nub into his mouth, he worked the shirt down over huge, strong shoulders, caressing fully with his hands down strong, sinewy arms as he pulled the shirt down with them and all the way off.

Reno uncoiled and moved in a fluid crawl to Rude's feet. While Cloud took care of the jacket and shirt, Reno went to work on Rude's heavy boots, unlacing them with nimble fingers, unable to resist giving Rude a nip on the meaty muscle of his calf as he divested the man of boots and socks.

Rearing up on his knees behind Cloud, he let his tongue trail up the slender man's perfect spine and reached around him to unbutton Rude's pants. Cloud's silky, sweet flesh begged bites, and Reno graced his white skin with suckling marks and nips. Slowly, he rubbed his hand over the heavy bulge of Rude's crotch, shaping the large, hot erection within his pants, his other hand trailing over Cloud's thigh and balls to cup him. Rude's finger's tangled with his and squeezed his hand once, briefly, sweetly, before the big man allowed Cloud to pull his shirt completely off of him.

Rude made a low sound when Cloud latched on to his nipple, his breath catching in his throat as Cloud's tongue darted and teased, as his soft mouth sucked his sensitive flesh in and nipped it. With Reno's hand caressing him through his pants, Cloud's mouth on his nipple, and the sexy disrobing the swordsman had done for Rude, the big man was all libido. When his arms came free of the shirt, he slipped them around Cloud's body – one cupping his back and the other bent so that his hand could cradle Cloud's head. He pulled his hips back a little for Reno to work his pants open, the man's hot, darting tongue reaching into the open seam of the buttons to stab at his swollen erection.

Sliding around to their sides, Reno managed to free Rude's massive cock and let it slap up against Cloud's, both men moaning softly at the contact. Purring in abject pleasure, Reno let his tongue trail over one dripping cock and then the other, tasting them both, tasting himself, eyes closed with bliss.

"All the way off, now," Rude whispered, and a shudder ran through his large, toned body at the ministrations of his two boys.

Cloud’s body shuddered with pleasure as he felt Reno’s tongue lap at his dripping cock, and he moaned loudly, breath hot against Rude’s now pert, raised nipple. He couldn’t resist the urge to rock his hips to gain some friction, and the feel of Rude’s massive cock made him gasp. Rude was hung like no other man Cloud had ever known, and the thought of the delightful pain made him shiver and moan with pleasure.

He took care of Rude’s other nipple while Reno used his delicious tongue, and Cloud let one hand glide down to cup Reno’s head, to slide into his silky soft hair and gently scratch his scalp.

When Rude gave them the order to strip him completely, Cloud slowly let himself slide down Rude’s body to kneel beside Reno. He looked into Reno’s eyes and leaned in for a delicious kiss before he let his hands get a hold of one side of Rude’s pants. He waited till Reno did the same on the other side and then they simultaneously tugged and eased the pants down each big, strong leg, revealing their Master in all his glory.

Cloud looked up, awe and admiration in his face as he leaned in and started to kiss up along one muscled, strong thigh, smiling as he saw Reno do the same on the other leg. Slowly Cloud worked his way up, hands sliding over dark skin, caressing and tingling while his lips and tongue made wet trails up along the expanse of Rude’s thigh.

Cloud savored the taste of Rude, reveled in his musky scent and slowly worked his way up to the delicious heavy balls, slowly letting his tongue wet the soft skin and gently suck at them taking them into his mouth as much as he could. He felt another tongue tease him then, and when he turned his head slightly he looked into Reno’s wonderful, deep blue eyes.

He couldn’t help it, he just had to reach up and cup Reno’s chin with his hand while leaning in to a deep, lingering kiss, and as their lips parted Cloud’s eyes shone with a beautiful light of pure and selfless love. He still couldn’t believe it, not entirely, but he felt it, and he just knew what it was. He was falling in love, not just in the moment but truly, deeply, and he felt everything tingle inside.

He only took a minute though, before he returned all his attention to their Papa, leaning in and kissing the sensitive spot at the base below Rude’s delicious cock, right above the balls. And then Cloud slowly let his tongue trail up along the long length of the underside of Rude’s fat, throbbing length. It was slick with precum slowly trailing from the slit in the head, and Cloud lapped at it with little moans of delight from the luscious taste while his hand found Reno’s and twined their fingers together, pulling a little, wanting to share their Master with him, letting Rude feel two hot tongues at the same time on his aching, pulsing cock.

Reno exhaled on a deep, contented sigh, his fingers twining with Cloud's, his tongue darting out to mingle with the other man's on Rude's turgid and pulsing cock. Eyes slit with pleasure, Reno followed Cloud's lead, working with him from tip to balls in tandem, tongue and teeth and sucking lips, teasing Rude and making his big body shudder, making the hard muscles of his thighs tighten beneath their braced hands.

With one large paw on either shaggy head, Rude took a step backwards and then another, stepping away from them, releasing his hold as he backed to his large, comfy chair. A slight quirk of his fingers had Reno crawling fluidly on all fours. Cloud, a quick study, came right with him, and the sight of his two boys on hands and knees flowing over the floor to him made him pull tight with want and aching desire. With a soft sound of yearning need, he settled his muscular body into his chair, legs spread wide to accommodate them both, and his eyes swept closed when he felt two hot puffs of breath, two wet and cunning tongues, two sets of soft, moist lips come tease his rigid length. Two sets of hands – one more calloused from wielding a sword, one slightly larger but more delicate – stroked and tickled the sensitive skin of his inner thighs and toyed with the heavy bulge of his balls. He pushed his hips forward a little and wriggled back, giving them more to work with, relaxing into the delicious play of mouths and hands on his welcoming flesh. Every once in awhile they would trade urgent, deep kisses, sucking on one another's mouths with the tip of his cock between them, and every once in awhile he could feel the movement, hear the sharp sound when Reno would reach down and give Cloud's strutted sex a light, teasing slap. But this was Papa's time, and his boys knew it, knew to keep their focus on him, to allow him this selfish indulgence he so rarely asked for.

Neither one of them stayed in one place long enough to encourage him any farther, mostly because Reno knew that Rude chose the time, the place, the way. When the teasing had reached its peak and Rude was ready, he snapped his fingers at Cloud, patted one bare thigh, and said, "Up."

Reno licked his lips with anticipation as Cloud moved so gracefully into Rude's lap. Fresh from his climax, the redhead was still too spent to do much more than just appreciate the sight of Rude fondling Cloud's straining cock, rubbing it in his big, rough palm. While Rude purred and praised his boys, Reno sucked him all the way down, deliberately wetting him even more before he pulled back and settled on his haunches, waiting for Rude.

"Here," Rude called, and when Reno wriggled up closer, he stroked the man's beautiful face until those blue eyes closed lazily. "Such a good boy for Papa, Reno. Such a good boy, eh?"

Reno's eyes opened, a sly smile on his face that was as cherished as it was wicked. With those long-fingered hands, he helped Rude shift Cloud around, straddling Rude's hips, his back to Papa's wide chest.

"Steady," Rude said, a command for Cloud to hold still, a request for Reno to help. The slender redhead helped Cloud stay balanced while Rude easily lifted him up. One hand on Rude's heavy sex and the other guiding Cloud's descent, Reno slid the wide, swollen head of Rude's cock home and watched with eager eyes while Cloud was slowly impaled.

"Touch him for Papa, Reno," Rude said, his breathing deep and raspy, excited. "Make him cum all over your pretty face for me."

Grinning, Reno reached out, got his knees under him to kneel there between their spread legs, and got Cloud's beautiful, dripping erection in a two-fisted grip.

Cloud could hardly breathe as he felt the anticipation wash through his body while Reno guided him down onto Rude’s huge, rigid organ, and as he was slowly pushed down a deep, wanton moan escaped him as the giant cock entered his tight opening and completely impaled him. He felt like he was being split in half, and the look on his face as his eyes rolled back and his eyelids lowered to half-mast could only be described as pure bliss.

Pain mingled with lust and pure desire into an almost incomprehensible, delicious pleasure, and Cloud felt his body tremble with the hardly restrained need to give completely in and just let himself get swallowed up by roaring fire within.

Ohgodssobig!” he gasped out as he finally settled on Rude’s hips, taking all of his Papa into his tight, burning body, and for a moment he could hardly breathe. It hurt like the fires of hell but the pain was so indescribably exquisite that it threatened to make his mind go blank from the searing desire that welled through him like a fountain of fire.

Cloud felt it spread into every part of his body, every limb, and soon the pain started to subside to give room for something far better and far more intense. Burning, unadulterated passion. He felt an urgent need to move and fuck himself on that huge, throbbing cock without any restraints at all but before he got to start moving his Master spoke again.

"Touch him for Papa, Reno. Make him cum all over your pretty face for me."

As Rude’s words sank into Cloud’s mind and he felt Reno settle between his legs, letting his slender hands slide around Cloud’s weeping, turgid organ, it was almost too much, too intense, and Cloud cried out with his teeth clenched in a desperate attempt to hold back what was already far too close. He could feel his control slip, and one look down into those beautiful, sultry eyes was all it took to break down all of Cloud’s resolve.

Green flashed in his blue orbs and a low growl of raw desire rose from his throat as his hips thrust up into those tight, squeezing hands, making Rude’s big cock rub against that sweet spot inside Cloud that made everything in his mind go white and his mouth howl with pleasure.

"That's good, that's good," Rude lowly purred, just liquid there in his chair with Cloud tightening around him like mad, wriggling and shifting and squeezing to get the stimulation he craved. It was heaven to Rude, just sitting there, relaxed, his hands steadying Cloud's hips, his eyes traveling the length of Cloud's slender back - not thrusting, not pushing, just letting Cloud's tight body milk him, prolonging his pleasure. He could already feel the urgency in his slender lover, already sense the coming rupture for him. Cloud was primed for it now, his earlier orgasm merely readying him for the moment.

And Reno was so good with his hands, Rude knew. Those almost delicate, but strong, long-fingered hands, so adept at stroking and squeezing, at those tickling little touches. The sensitive pads of Reno's fingers could find every nerve-rich patch of skin on a man's body in under a minute, and he already had experience with Cloud's.

Looking up at the man writhing and moaning on Rude's heavy cock, Reno concentrated on him, teasing his fingers, squeezing, feeling the pulse and tightness of Cloud's flesh. With both hands he kept up an endless tunnel of rippling, calloused skin, the roughness adding its own edge of pleasure. With a twist of his tight palm at the head, Reno started at the base again and happened to look up in time to see Cloud's eyes bleed to green, stark and bright and beautiful, just as they had back in the bar when the Turks had first picked him up.

"Papa," he said, seeing it was about to happen. "He's – "

"Up," Rude said, groaning a little at the wild tightening of Cloud's body around him. "Up now, Reno."

He leaned up and eased forward, cradling Cloud's gyrating body in his groin, moaning in breathless time with him as he pitched forward to see Reno rear up on his knees. The redhead slid the tip of his tongue out and flicked it over Cloud's swollen, twitching head, kept his hands working quickly and firmly, and moaned in bliss as Cloud jerked hard, spurting cum up over Reno's mouth and face.

Cloud’s mind more or less exploded by the first spurt of come, and the sound of Reno’s moan as it hit his face completely broke down every last bit of Cloud’s resolve and the orgasm hit him full force.

Climaxing while being impaled on Rude’s giant cock was a mind blowing experience since Cloud’s insides were already completely stretched to its limits, and the muscle spasms were wrecking his entire body, milking around the massive shaft with intense force and more or less forcing Cloud to loudly cry out his pleasure in the room.

He simply couldn’t hold it back, and as the spasms intensified while the orgasm rode his entire body, he arched his back against Rude’s strong chest, throwing his neck back against his strong shoulder while his hips thrust again and again into Reno’s cunning hands, riding Rude until he had nothing more to give.

And oh gods, the sight of it! The sight of his own cum painting Reno’s beautiful, beautiful face in thick milky white ribbons… It kept the sensations and the power of the orgasm surging through his body, not letting him come down from the high yet, as he still rode Rude’s giant cock moaning like a wanton whore.

Cloud wanted to lick it off that beautiful face, taste himself while kissing Reno so deep, suck his tongue so hard, that the lithe redhead would never forget it ever again.

Cloud could feel Rude’s rigid flesh swell inside him, pulsing, as Cloud milked him with his lithe, writhing body, panting and arching back against the delightful muscle of Rude’s massive chest.

Rude clutched Cloud tightly to his chest and gladly let himself go to the amazing sight of Cloud coming on Reno's beautiful, sly face as the man's body milked him dry.

His strong, trim back arched hard, his hips rocking up tight in a rough pulse as he gasped, eyes fastened on Reno's streaked face, the powerful climax breaking over him with the force of a tidal wave. Every nerve ending screamed with pleasure, every inch of his skin was alive with fiery sensation that pushed him higher and higher. And then he felt one of Reno's warm palms slide down and cunningly squeeze his heavy balls and he ruptured with a deep, fluid, shocked curse.

His big body pulsed and twitched, jetting his release deep into Cloud's tight, squeezing backside. He'd held it back all this while, and now that it was unleashed, the shocking force of it gratified him to the tips of his curled toes. With a sobbing moan, he spilled himself in gushes, shoving deep into Cloud's body to have his full length sheathed in such tight, slick warmth.

"Oh, gods*, Cloud!" Rude gasped, on the edge of his control now, and pushed there by his two sly and delightful boys. He tried to be careful, to be attuned to Cloud's needs, but the young swordsman clenched and caused yet another eruption of pleasure for Rude.

Shuddering in a spasm of pleasure, he rocked backwards in the chair, bouncing Cloud on his hips, writhing with the force of it. His breath came between his clenched teeth in a low, whine of pleasure, his eyes shut tightly and his fingers clenching on Cloud's hips until the painful, amazing spasms calmed.

"Rough one," Reno said, a lopsided grin on his face, one hand on Rude's loosening balls, and the other still gently stroking Cloud's twitching sex. He poked his tongue out and tasted the cum on his lips, making an utterly sordid noise as he did so, a twinkle in his blue eyes. Giving Cloud a deliberately sultry stare, he wriggled up to press his lean upper belly to Cloud's softening sex and lifted his face to him, purring, "Give me a kiss, Cloud."

Cloud’s eyes were hazed with pleasure as he tilted his head a little to look into Reno’s eyes, those sly orbs sparkling a magnificent blue, and the sultry stare drawing Cloud in like a magnet. The sight of Reno painted in his cum make Cloud purr deep in his throat, and again he felt the urge to just lick him all over. But before he could do anything, Reno’s low purr sounded.

Cloud felt a powerful jolt in his groin, a deep spark of fire in his core and he didn’t hesitate to let his tongue dart out and lick a strand of cum off Reno’s cheek, tasting it, before he leaned down to Reno’s luscious, wet mouth, opening up for him and kissing him like there was no tomorrow. He could taste himself on Reno’s lips and in his mouth as well, letting his tongue tease Reno’s in a wet, sultry dance and ending up with Cloud sucking on Reno’s wet tongue hard and deep, like his life depended on it.


1                    7                    9

Previous Stories In The Hard Time Series (Start at the top :D )

Date: 2009-11-04 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puerdemon.livejournal.com
*smiles shyly and happily and hugs herself tightly*
What a joy to be so complete and so loved! Those are two very lucky boys!

Date: 2009-11-06 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hehe! They really are! And Rude is one hell of a lucky man! *snuggles you* Thanks, boo boo! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2009-11-07 09:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Soo happy you liked it! I would definitely say that they are lucky boys.

And I'm even happier that it had such a nice affect on you! *snuggles*

Date: 2009-11-04 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aikonamika.livejournal.com
*lying in an unconscious puddle from this, delirious smile on her face*

Date: 2009-11-06 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
*snuggles down next to you and grins* Thanks, honey! Glad we could be of service ;)

Date: 2009-11-07 09:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
*pokes gently and looks to jaded as aikonamika stirs lightly*

Whew, she's still alive!

Delirious is good, as long as it's followed by a happy smile like that. Thank you so much, honey! I'm glad we continue to please. :D

Date: 2009-11-04 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/tarot_card_/
JFC, so hot!

I really, really love this; definite bright point to my day any time I see this on my flist!

Date: 2009-11-06 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
:D WOOT! Thank you! And we're happy to help brighten your day!

Date: 2009-11-07 10:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Aww, it's really nice to know that we can brighten your day like this. Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it so much!

Date: 2009-11-04 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilymoon1.livejournal.com
Yay for Cloud! All I can say this time is that I love you two, and I feel like I need a smoke and a drink now.

As always...so, so looking forward to the next part. Hell, I hope it never ends. After all, they're just starting their lives together. It can only get better.

Date: 2009-11-06 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
AW! We love you, too! *joins you for a smoke and a drink*

There's plenty more to come! We're just so glad you love this story as much as we do! And you're right, it can only get better! *snuggles you*

Date: 2009-11-07 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Oh man, I'm so glad you like it so much. Writing this series has been (and still is) an amazing experience, and I love this story to bits, so it means the world to me that you do too. It means that we really got something right.

And I agree, from here, things will definitely start to get really amazing :)

We love you too, honey! And count me in for a drink! ;)

Date: 2009-11-04 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragons-f-wolf.livejournal.com
Awww, I love OT3s. But you know that already. lol

Date: 2009-11-06 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hehe! I sure do! Thank you, kiddo! I just had a visit to Yverro a little while ago, so WOOT! ;)

Date: 2009-11-08 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
We sure do know! ;) Thank you, honey, I'm glad you like this so much! OT3s are the best!

Date: 2009-11-05 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] candy-akanbo98.livejournal.com
You guys must've read my mind.
After I had read the last chapter to this,
I thought "They should totally both tongue Rude, I know it's coming!"

And then BAM!
here it is, but of course its way better than I had imagined. This really made me happy. I am now COMPLETE < 3

This has to be my favorite chapter, it fulfilled my dark fantasy xD!

And RUDE, JUST OMG
he's like my new Sephiroth fetish or something >_>''
When he gives the Good Boy kisses and when he's just sitting there letting Cloud go all out and and and..... *dies repeatedly*

Thankyou so muchhh<3333

Date: 2009-11-06 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hehe! Great minds think alike, boo boo! And I'm glad we could complete you :D I like the sound of that! And any old dark fantasy, you just shoot my way (anonymously, if it freaks you) and we will see how we can work them in!

And YAY FOR RUDE!!! I'm so excited and happy that he's getting himself some new fans! It was what I had hoped for when I first imagined his character, so YAYNESS! So thank YOU so much!!! *dies repeatedly with you*

Date: 2009-11-08 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
YAY for fulfilling dark fantasies!!! Really, jaded is right, if you have any suggestions let us hear about it! It just might be something we hadn't thought about!

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, I'm so glad we came through for you and were able to complete you. That is just an awesome compliment!

Date: 2009-11-05 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kel-fish.livejournal.com
I... I... ungh. I don't have much else to say. Just... thank you, and I think I might be in love with you both or something. *melts onto the floor and becomes useless to the world*

I'm so glad it says there's a part nine. Is this a Neverending Story? Hmm? Looking forward to next week, even if I will be made absolutely useless again.

Date: 2009-11-06 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hehe! Thank you! *blushes* That means the world to both of us! *scoops you off of the floor and puts you in a recovery bowl* So happy to hear that you liked it!!! And yes, there is a huge amount of RP we have still to show! And it's mostly love-porn :D

Thanks again, boo boo!

Date: 2009-11-08 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Hehe, rendering you useless is actually kind of an achievement, isn't it? WOOT! I'm glad it had such an amazing effect on you!

And like jaded said, we're not going to stop writing this any time soon! That's a promise!

Date: 2009-11-05 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elflover59.livejournal.com
It is good to see all of them so happy. This story is so hot.;)

Date: 2009-11-06 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you!!! I'm with you on this one - it's great to see Cloud happy and at peace, and they make such a yummy trio! Thank you so much, kiddo!

Date: 2009-11-08 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, honey, I'm glad we manage to make the emotions and the porn mingle into something really nice and believable!

They all really deserves some happiness and they make a perfect trio, each of them providing something the others need.

Date: 2009-11-05 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ldyavalon.livejournal.com
*dies*

*reads some more*

*dies again*

This just made my night. You two have hit kinks I didn't even know I HAD xD Work just got much better :P

Date: 2009-11-06 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Hehe! WOOT for discovered kinks!!!! Hehehee! Thanks, darlin', you're the best ;) And I'm happy we can help work go faster for ya!

Date: 2009-11-08 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
*revives and revives some more* LOL!

I'm so glad you like this so much. Discovering new kinks is the best, and we're always open for suggestions!

I'm really happy that we could make your workday better! *snuggles*

Date: 2009-11-05 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-elodie.livejournal.com
You just made a crappy day worth having. *rolls in the fic and luffs it purring*

Date: 2009-11-06 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
*snuggles you* Thank you, boo boo - I hope things get better for you! And I'm glad that Zill and I could help make your day a little better!

Date: 2009-11-08 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Thank you so much honey, it really means a lot that we could help make your crappy day better! That is some compliment!

*pets and rubs gently behind ears*

Date: 2009-11-05 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belatrix-labe.livejournal.com
Guys...this is so lovely, sadistically and madly hot!
I love you guys...At each chapter I love it more. I do hope that you never ends to write this, and I will put it in my Santa Claus' letter that I wish to live there!!!!
I said it before and I have to say it again- it's not porn it's love with wonderful sex!

Date: 2009-11-06 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you so much, Bela! We love you, too! And their door is always open, but I have to say that if you find them somewhere, you gotta let me know so I can come, too, lol! *snuggles you* Thank you so much, kiddo, I'm really glad to hear that the love is coming through :D

Date: 2009-11-08 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Aww, Bela, thank you so much! i'm so glad that we manage to keep the story interesting and that the emotional part is working so well!

We love you too, honey, and thank you again for such a sweet and wonderful comment!

Date: 2009-11-06 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladynero.livejournal.com
I didn't get a chance to read this until today.

Thank you for making a totally crappy 24 hours better.

I look forward to the next part.

Date: 2009-11-06 04:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
Aw!!! Thank you, sweetie! I hope your next 24 hours is a lot happier! *snuggles you*

Date: 2009-11-07 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladynero.livejournal.com
*bitter laugh* It's gonna get worse before it gets better unfortunately.

Date: 2009-11-11 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
If you need someone to talk to or even just rant at, drop me a message, okay?

Date: 2009-11-12 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladynero.livejournal.com
*hugs* thanks.

Date: 2009-11-08 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Oh man, it seems that crappy days are becoming the general rule here. I'm so glad we could help make yours better, and we promise we'll do our best to keep being able to do that.

I hope things will look better for you soon! *snuggles*

Date: 2009-11-12 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladynero.livejournal.com
eh, they'll be fine for a while (maybe) but after the new year, things are going to suck majorly.

Date: 2009-11-06 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] robonun.livejournal.com
O.O

I don't think my eyes are going to go back to normal any time soon.

:D

Date: 2009-11-08 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zilldk.livejournal.com
Hehe I choose to take that as a compliment! XD

I hope you'll have your eyes back to normal soon so you'll be able to read the next part.

Thank you so much, we're really glad you liked it! :D

Date: 2009-11-11 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaded-grin.livejournal.com
:D Why, thank you! I think Big Eyes are a good thing, right? :D

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