Midgar: The Soap - Season Two: Episode 1
Nov. 30th, 2009 12:28 pmReeve let himself into his studio with the strange feeling that he’d been gone forever. It hadn’t been more than a few days, but the place looked strange to him, desolate without his beloved paintings, and dispirited with only that portrait of Yuffie set up in the main room. He truly was beginning to hate that painting, but there was nothing to be done about it. Her father wanted something very specific, very not Reeve Tuesti, and he’d agreed. All he could do now was finish it and get it out of here. It was making himself work on it that would be the bigger issue.
He sighed and put his bags down, wondering if he would return to Genesis’s place or where he would go at all. He didn’t have a key, after all. It wasn’t like they were really dating…was it?
He flipped the lights on all over his studio and gathered his brushes, mixing paint with a frown, trying to remember Yuffie at her best and brightest. But the paint went on in uninspired strokes, a mere covering for the canvas as opposed to true vibrancy. He hated that he was even willing to do this, but he would give it his best shot.
While he painted, he thought of Yuffie and the afternoon they’d spent together in his hotel room, paid for by Genesis. She’d been animated as always, laughing and fun, alternately flirty and playful. It was hard for a man like Reeve to sort out her true intent. He much preferred people direct in their wants as opposed to people who made him guess endlessly. But he’d seen no sign of a drug and alcohol ruined young woman that day. He’d seen Yuffie without the influence of Genesis’s hangers-on, without the press watching, without a crowd to fuel her need for the spotlight. That woman he could love. That woman was the one he wanted to paint, the one he could call his own if he was ever good enough for her…
He thought guiltily of Genesis – going out of his way to assist him, being oddly thoughtful of the little things. He wondered what the man really wanted, and tried to convince himself that it wasn’t him. If he decided to try wooing Yuffie, to get her to see him as a viable romantic interest, it could go odd with Genesis as her best friend and his self-proclaimed lover.
He sighed and put his brushes down, leaving the partially done painting on its easel. He closed his eyes and took a deep breath, knowing that he was putting off the inevitable. He hadn’t rushed here straight from Setora to work on a dismal portrait and he knew it. He’d come to do the painting he’d seen in his mind, he’d just needed the time to truly round it out in his head. Timing was everything in his artist’s heart – it had to feel right before he could start it, and he felt it tugging at him even now.
He busied about for a long while getting things set up, but it was with a glow of content determination that he’d lacked mere hours before. He dragged a large frame into the side room of his studio, away from prying eyes and the sudden entrance of unwelcome visitors. He pieced his canvas and stretched it, taking painstaking care that it was perfect, just the size he knew would do justice to what he saw. He primed it and waited impatiently for it to dry so that he could prime it again and again, and finally he was ready. He got his paints together, gathered his brushes and rags, and locked the small door behind him so that he could begin.
Cloud rushed back towards the front but caught a flash of movement out of the corner of his eye. He skittered to a halt, his heart pounding as he watched someone come out of the side door.
It was Mrs. ShinRa’s bodyguard, the Chechislanian warlord known as Rudolph Doležal, and he was carrying something towards a waiting car.
Cloud slipped his phone out, switched it to camera mode, zoomed in, and nearly dropped it when he saw what the man had in his arms.
It was Yazoo ShinRa’s boneless, limp body.
Cloud didn’t really think, he just started snapping pictures of the man putting her body in the trunk of the car and closing it with neat efficiency. Cloud didn’t even attempt to confront him – she was clearly dead, whatever dreadful plan had already been put into place. But, hopefully, with these pictures he could convince the police department to listen to him. Besides, he wasn’t stupid enough to tangle with a man like Doležal, who had a history of being brutal and merciless.
The man adjusted his sunglasses, moved to the driver’s side of the car, and got in. As it pulled away, Cloud got a snapshot of the license plate and then flipped the phone around.
He’d done some looking since he’d last called the police department, and dialed a number he was sure would offer no help, but he had to try something.
“This is Cloud Strife. Yazoo ShinRa has been killed and her murderer is just now leaving to go dispose of her body,” he said as soon as the line picked up. “I have photographs of the whole thing.”
There was a long silence before Chief Hewley tonelessly said, “Mister Strife, if you continue to badger me with these foolish publicity pranks, I’ll have you locked up for making a false report to an officer of the law. Don’t call back.”
The line went dead, but Cloud wasn’t surprised.
“Fucking idiot,” Cloud breathed, shoving his phone into his pocket. He had no choice now, for sure. At the very least he would see who was involved in it. He doubted very much that Rufus was –
But, he’d been wrong before, and from what Cloud knew of the jaded people in Midgar, he wouldn’t be too surprised.
Marlene stayed curled in the corner of the closet, her hands over her mouth and her wide eyes running with tears even after what felt like forever.
She’d been frozen, paralyzed, unable to help her friend. She’s simply watched, horrified, while Rude had choked the life out of Yazoo ShinRa. She hadn’t done anything to help her, she’d just watched her eyes roll up and her body slump into death. Crouched in petrified silence, too afraid for her own life to be courageous enough to save Yazoo’s, she’d witnessed Rude gather Yazoo’s body up along with an envelope, and simply leave with her dangling in his arms like a limp little doll.
Ashamed, terrified, and nearly in hysterics but for her silence, Marlene curled tighter into a ball among
Cloud found his way unbarred, the front door unlocked, the house vast and empty. No one called him out, no one asked him what he was doing there – anyone off of the street could walk in now and do any number of terrible things.
With a grim frown, he shut the door firmly behind him and locked it before he ran up the stairs. He didn’t know the first thing about the layout of this house, only where Mrs. ShinRa’s suite was located, and that she didn’t share it with her husband. He hesitated on the landing until he heard the sound of a game coming from his left, and headed down towards the huge double doors at the end.
“Hey! Hey! Anybody in there?” he shouted, pounding on the tastefully lacquered wood. “Hey! I need to see Mister ShinRa!”
The door was opened by a young man with light brown hair and suspicious eyes who asked, “Who’re you?”
“I’m Cloud Strife, the reporter,” he answered. “Something terrible has happened to Mrs. ShinRa and I need to see her husband right now.”
Oddly enough, the boy didn’t argue. His eyes widened and he stepped aside, hollering, “Mister ShinRa! Some reporter here to see you!”
“Thanks,” Cloud breathed, rushing into the room towards the noise of the game.
He saw Rufus ShinRa in his bathrobe, sitting at the bar in his den while a baseball game played on the suspended, huge flat-screen. The man didn’t so much as twitch when he said, “Mister ShinRa – your wife has been harmed, sir. Your gate guards are dead and her bodyguard has killed her. Please, you need to call the police!”
Rufus turned from the screen and wobbled dangerously on his stool, asking, “What? Who the fuck are you?”
“I’m Cloud Strife,” he said, tired of having to answer pointless questions when a woman was dead and her killer was getting away. “Sir, your wife! Get yourself together, for the gods’ sake! She’s dead! And the man who killed her is still out there with her body!”
Rufus peered at him and asked, “Aren’t you the fellow who took those pictures of my wife with
Cloud nearly tugged his own hair out in frustration. In a heated, angry hiss, he said, “That’s not the point! She’s dead and her killer has left with her body! You need to call the cops! Put that fucking glass down, get off of your fat ass, and do something!”
“Sir, you really do need to do something,” the boy put in, and he sounded almost frantic. “Sir – ”
“Both of you shut up!” Rufus roared, and he did fall off of his stool, but managed to catch himself. “This is insane! How the hell did you get into this house?”
All three of them started yelling back and forth, the clamor rising to a deafening roar.
In the middle of the confusion came a purring, tired, and thoroughly bored voice saying, “Well, this is a mess…”
Elena started from her half-slumber when she heard Rufus and Denzel both shouting to be heard over a third, strange voice. She felt
The man’s blue eyes fluttered but they were cloudy, unfocused, and when they lit on her there was no recognition in their depths.
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“What time is it?” he asked, levering himself up and touching his forehead. “What was that noise?”
“I’m not sure what time it is,” she answered. “It’s late. And Rufus is arguing with someone. Do you want me to go check?”
He glanced around the room, a strange look on his face, his skin paler than normal. After a moment, he asked, “What time is it?”
Elena hesitated a moment before she said, “I…I just told you, I’m not sure.
He shook his head again, but more like he was clearing it than he was negating her words. His fingertips pressed to his temple and he said, “My head hurts. It must be late. Do you know what time it is?”
Elena slipped out of the bed and checked her watch, saying, “It’s about two in the morning. Is that better?”
He got up suddenly, naked but unaware of it. He stood with his back to her, his skin marred with the pink seams of old scars, his loose red hair falling down to brush the top of his backside.
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He glanced back at her, a little more himself, something lighting his blue eyes that had not been there when he’d first awoken.
“What did you just tell me?”
“That it was two in the morning,” she answered, trembling. “And that Rufus is arguing with someone, I’m not sure who.”
“Two in the morning, fuck,” he repeated, and bent to snatch his pants up. He looked at her again as he pulled them on and took in the disheveled bed. With a low growl, he asked, “What the fuck were you doing in bed with me?”
Elena blanched but said nothing.
“Did you fuck me while I was out, you crazy cunt?” he demanded, all traces of his confusion gone in a rush of fury. He came at her with his unfastened pants clinging to his narrow hips and grabbed her bare shoulders with hard, bruising hands. He shook her until her teeth rattled and snarled, “Fucking answer me, you whore! Did you fuck me while I was out?”
Elena held her silence, she just stared up at him, unwilling to risk anything at all right now. It was the loud shout that Yazoo ShinRa was dead that probably saved her life. It shocked both of them so much that they just stared at each other in horror, Elena thinking that
Shaking at her close call, Elena scrambled from the bed and pulled one of Rufus’s robes on, belting it tightly before she, too, headed out to see what was going on.
“Lazard!” Rufus said, and for a moment he was almost relieved…until the familiar suspicious rivalry kicked in, making him hiss, “What are you doing here?”
“I came by to drop off some paperwork and found chaos,” Lazard smoothly said, unruffled by the madness around him. He stepped into the room with a soft wrinkle of his nose. “Dead security guards, shouting, missing wives – whatever have you managed to do now, Rufus?”
“I haven’t done a damned thing!” Rufus snarled. “What dead bodyguards? And don’t scold me like a child, damn it! What the hell is wrong with everyone tonight?”
He glared from Cloud to Denzel to Lazard, angry and bewildered.
“Rufus,” Lazard began, straightening his tie out of habit. “The guards posted at the guardhouse are dead, and I distinctly heard this young man say that he saw someone leaving the premises with your wife’s body. Perhaps you can tell me what is wrong?”
“I’m done trying to talk sense to a drunk!” Cloud said, returning Rufus’s glare with a darker one of his own. “I’m trying the police – maybe this time they will listen to me.”
“I don’t think so,” Lazard said, before Rufus could even react. The blond removed his glasses and began to clean them with his spotless white handkerchief.
Cloud gaped at him, utterly shocked.
“Look, Mister Deusericus, I know you’re co-chair of ShinRa Industries, but – ”
“I will take care of this,” Lazard told him, putting his glasses back on. “The police will not be involved. The ShinRa name must be upheld.”
Rufus flushed, ashamed of the level of relief he felt. Once more, Lazard was the one to remember responsibility, to come to the defense and rescue of the ShinRa name. Rufus knew that he should have been the one to so easily rebuff Cloud’s suggestion, to take charge of the situation and turn it to his advantage.
Instead, Lazard was the one to stride in, all silky and urbane, clearly in control.
“Listen, Mister…”
“Strife,” Cloud supplied, thoroughly put out with having to name himself yet again. “Cloud Strife.”
“Mister Strife,” Lazard said, affecting not to notice Rufus glancing furtively back towards his bar. “I understand why you wish to go to the authorities, but let me assure you that I will handle this little issue without involving unnecessary press.”
Rufus snorted and said, “He is the press! He works for FLASH! And why are you here again, Strife?”
“You let me in to speak to your wife, remember?” Cloud flatly asked, irritated.
“Well…maybe you had a hand in this madness,” Rufus suggested.
“Why, you arrogant, drunk asshole – ”
“Mister Strife,” Lazard cut in, stepping up to block Cloud’s glare in Rufus’s direction. “What precisely did you see? I need to know everything.”
Cloud blinked at him a few times, and then held out his phone, letting Lazard scroll through the pictures.
“I’ve already sent them to my colleagues,” he said, forestalling any attempts to erase them. “I don’t like what’s happened here, Deusericus. Apparently, I’m the only one who cares that Yazoo ShinRa is dead.”
Lazard frowned at the pictures and looked back at Rufus, who was sidling up to his bar. The man poured himself another drink and peered into the bottle when it didn’t yield a full cup.
“Are you serious?” Cloud cried. “Your wife is dead! What the hell are you doing?”
“Looking for his dignity, no doubt,” Lazard observed, and handed the phone back. “You knew an awful lot about what was happening here, Mister Strife. I believe it would be wiser to keep you close for now. I want to see her suite. You’re coming, too, Rufus.”
He sat down at the bar and dropped his head into his hands, willing the shakes and the sickness to go away. Something bad had happened to
He tried to remember where he’d been, what he’d been doing, but this kind of thing had happened to him before after a particularly terrible seizure. At least this time he hadn’t pissed himself, but he could do without the temporary amnesia. Last time he’d recalled things after the fact, but he wasn’t sure he could this time. Nothing was reminding him of anything, nothing was jogging foggy memories.
He felt the nausea fade and staggered to his feet, following in the wake of the small party headed to
There was no sign of a struggle, no whisper that aught had gone awry. Cloud had told Lazard of Rude’s history on the way to
“And are you quite sure of your facts?” the man asked, crossing to the closet within
“Hush, now, it’s alright,” Lazard soothed, and Rufus began to show signs of alarm now that there was a witness. He huffed indignantly when
“Where is she?”
“You tell us,” Cloud snarled, rounding on him, hands on hips. “You were one of the last people to see her alive. How much did you pay Rude to kill her, huh?”
“What?”
Denzel came forward and put his arm around Marlene from the other side, helping her to sit on
“I didn’t pay nobody to knock her off! What the fuck are you talking about?”
“You kicked me out of her room!” Cloud flared. “You told me to get lost and not come back, and on my way out I found the security guards dead in the shack! By the time I finished checking for the camera footage, I came back to find Rudolph Doležal stuffing her body into the trunk of a car that no one seems very interested in finding!”
Rufus flushed but said nothing in answer. He only gestured at
“We’ll talk now!”
“He choked her and he left,” Marlene whimpered, hiding her face against Denzel’s throat, soaking his skin with tears. “I saw the whole thing! And you were here, Mister Reno! How could you let this happen?”
She lifted her head and fixed her accusing, angry eyes on his shocked face.
“You argued with her! You hurt her! And when you left her all alone and suffering, he came in and finished the job!”
Cloud glanced from one to the other and said, “Tell me again how you didn’t set this up.”
“Alright, that’s enough,” Lazard said, forestalling any angry arguments. He pulled his cell phone out, saying as he sent messages, “If I find out that anyone in this room ever speaks of what happened here tonight, I will have them exiled to a very tiny, very private, very desolate little island in the middle of the world’s coldest ocean.”
They all looked at him, too surprised to respond.
“I will take care of this,” he said. “Denzel, please take Miss Marlene to Rufus’s den and see what sense you can make of her story. Cloud, go with them, please, and make sure you take down everything that she says – you’re in this up to your eyeballs, now, we may as well make use of you. We’ll discuss compensation afterwards. Rufus, you’ll stay here with me and we’re going to have a very long and doubtlessly boring discussion regarding your culpability in this situation. And
Denzel helped Marlene to her feet and Cloud sullenly assisted him. The talk of compensation had mollified him, but he was clearly unhappy about not pursuing
“For all intents and purposes, Yazoo ShinRa is dead,” Lazard coolly told him. “What we’re going to do now is make sure that no more ShinRas meet the same fate.”
No one saw Elena in the shadow of the foyer doorway, quiet and alert, able to hear quite clearly everything that was said in
Once everyone was gone, Rufus once more was alone with the co-chair of ShinRa Industries, a man who was equal in rank to himself, if not better groomed for the Presidency.
“Sit, before you fall down,” Lazard said, untying the sash on his coat and shedding it, draping it carefully over the back of the little chair at
He was impeccably dressed in a tasteful suit, his lavender tie perfect and his white shirt starched. Rufus felt a shoddy second next to him, unshaven, dressed in his bathrobe, his hair uncombed.
Lazard began to open the drawers of the desk, rummaging through things as he said, “You have set yourself up to have a big problem, Rufus – one which could end in a very bloody, very long war.”
“I didn’t have my wife killed,” Rufus sullenly said, glaring at him.
Lazard sighed and turned to face him, saying, “I have it on good authority that you were in league with
Rufus poked his lower lip out and refused to answer.
“Rufus,” Lazard said, and made an elegant gesture of exasperation. “It may have escaped your notice, but I am here to help clean up whatever mess you’ve managed to make. Now, tell me everything, or I’ll inform the President that he needs to increase weapons production because we shall very soon be at war with the Cetrans.”
Rufus paled, beginning to realize what the loss of
“I see you begin to comprehend the gravity of our situation,” Lazard said, pushing away from the desk to go sorting through
Rufus had to swallow twice to get his pride down, but his voice was steady when he asked, “What do you suggest?”
Lazard lifted a slim black book out of the drawer, followed by a ribbon-bound packet of similar books.
“I will inform the police that
Rufus weighed that and asked, “Can’t we just tell him that he kidnapped her? It’s partially true.”
“No, they would expect a ransom demand and would grow suspicious when none was forthcoming,” Lazard explained, folding back the cover on the loose book to scan the first page. “They would also demand to know why you allowed such a man to guard her in the first pl – ”
“He said her father had sent him,” Rufus cut in, earning himself a scathing look from Lazard.
“Did you verify?” the man asked, and when Rufus flushed, he added, “I believe it is safe to say that he was lying. No,
Rufus considered it and realized that Lazard was right. Pretending that
“You will play the part of the wounded and bewildered husband,” Lazard said. “And you will only speak in special appeals for her to return, all other press will be handled by me. And now…”
He turned and dropped the books into Rufus’s lap, leaning close to say directly into his face, “You need to tell me exactly what happened to bring us to this point.”
But that paled before the larger, more pressing issue –
They were so sure of it that it must be true. No one stuffed a living body into the trunk if they cared for the person they did it to. Marlene watched her get choked to death, watched Rude leave with an envelope…
Something tugged at his memory as the city lights flashed past the window. An envelope, and
He trembled, sweat breaking out on his pale skin. He really hoped that Mei Li was home, because he could use some Blitz right now to clear his shakes, and she always kept a bunch of the small blue pills on her.
“Fuck amnesia,” he growled, shaking his shaggy head, his heart heavy. He’d go through his travel itinerary, he’d check his flights and receipts – surely something would trigger the return of his memories, because he didn’t have the patience to wait for time to unveil them.
He was still equal parts furious and despairing when he returned home, so much so that he shoved Neala aside without listening to her anxious chatter.
He pushed open the heavy wooden doors of his suite and stopped short, taking in the bare foyer with incredulous eyes.
There was no flurry of feathers, no indignant squawking – every last one of his exotic birds was gone.
And he knew…he knew.
Kadaj had always said that
He strode through the empty room and into his bedroom, flinging open the closet, then the dresser drawers, searching for some small sign that Kadaj was still here.
Nothing. Not even Mei Li was around to shed light on this for him.
Kadaj was gone, and not all of his panic was from knowing that Sephiroth would skin him. The greater part of it was a deepening of that heavy loss he’d suffered with
Now…now he knew better.
Cloud had resigned himself to the situation despite his prior determination that no other life be lost at the hands of Rudolph Doležal while he could stop it. He took a good portion of the blame for himself, for not being more insistent with the police, for not warning her when he had her alone. He’d just never dreamed that something would come of it so soon, or that
And after interviewing Marlene, it would seem to him that Rufus was more involved than he’d first thought possible.
The events that she described prior to
“And you don’t know what it was over?” he asked again, leaning against the desk.
“No,” Marlene whispered, huddled in a chair while Denzel kept a friendly, soothing hand on her shoulder. “He made her call her father and have their Wutain assets transferred to some company…Dai something, or Dey something…”
“So her family knows she was being blackmailed,” Cloud mused, thinking that this mess was going from bad to worse.
“D…do…” Marlene hiccupped on a sob and managed to ask, “Do you think Mister Reno had him k…kill her?”
Cloud thought back on what she’d told him and said, “No, I don’t, actually. I think Doležal saw his chance and he took it. This blackmail thing just gave him an opportunity.”
Marlene made a strangled sound and fell into wretched tears, sobbing hysterically, “I told him to come! I got scared when I heard Mister Reno make her cry and I texted him to come! It was all my fault!”
Neither Cloud nor Denzel could think of any way to console her, but Denzel at least tried. He crouched next to her chair so that she could sob on his shoulder, and said to Cloud in a low voice, “You’d best go tell Mister Deusericus.”
Cloud nodded, and headed back out to find Lazard.
Season One
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-30 08:30 pm (UTC)Incoherency and stolen time at work. I'll have to come back for a better comment but right now I'm bouncing in my seat a little. =D
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First thing, I really wasn't expecting this to be up so soon. I thought it was going to be like TV where they show repeats over Christmas (which sux, btw), so seeing the season 2 opener already up totally rocked!
And it's a great episode...
Cloud's really got himself into the thick of it, hasn't he? This is great because, you know, inside scoop on the world's richest family, but scary because I think Lazard has buried a lot of 'inconveniences'. If Cloud's not careful, he'll be one of those.
Reno's world just went 'poof!'. I almost feel sorry for the guy, except that I don't really. I feel sorry for Kadaj, who made a terrible mistake. I feel sorry for Yazoo, whose first love caused him so much pain. I'll feel sorry for Reno later, when he's trying to fix things. I think he's going to have a very hard time doing that.
Elena's lurking, with big ears. She's going to either deepen the hole she's in with Lazard, or use the info to bargain her way out the one she's in with Reno.
Now I got something to look forward to again. =D
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:46 pm (UTC)I wanted to give Cloud a chance to have a little of the spotlight. He's such a huge FFVII character - pretty much one of THE FVII characters along with Seph - that I wanted to make sure he got some face-time. He's going to have to be clever and find ways to stay important to Lazard, because you're right - Reno isn't the only one with connections below the plate. He's been doing the President's Needful Things for years, he can get rid of one lonely little reporter.
Reno's world definitely has caved in around him. He was so very secure in the strength of Kadaj's love for him that he didn't think he would ever lose him...but Kadaj isn't about to be taken for granted by anyone, even if he loves them. It isn't coincidence that he and Yazoo vanished at the same time, or experienced the same kind of terrible hurt. Kadaj has made a mistake, but if he lives through it then he will learn from it...and there is still Mei Li :D
Yazoo will become a kind of saint in Reno's mind when he finally recalls exactly what happened. Retrograde amnesia of the kind he has isn't usually permanent, but it will take him a little while. And then we have to wonder, why the seizures?
*noms Elena* God, I really have to say that I love her to bits! Is that terrible of me? She is an opportunist, but she makes no excuses for herself. She sees a chance and she takes it. Hm...maybe I should end her up with Rude?
I'm always happy to help a Monday suck less! And I'm really glad you liked the episode! Here's hoping for a full Season, yeah? :D
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Date: 2009-11-30 08:34 pm (UTC)I secretly hope that Yazoo isn´t dead, but unconcious. Rude seemed pretty attached to her, and maybe he couldn´t really do it in the end. (imagine the drama when he finds out that Yazoo is a physical 'he' O__o)
I think it was pretty sad that really, not many people seemed to concerned about Yazoo´s death. Maybe it´s better if she really was dead and never find out *sigh* But then again Yuffie and Co don´t even know yet.
I really liked Cloud here, his reaction seemed the most normal and concerned to me, and despite his usual attitude I think he is a pretty decent guy!
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:16 pm (UTC)I can't spill any secrets, but...:D Trust me?
And you're right, it was sad that Cloud was the only one really wanting to go after her. He and Marlene (and, a bit later, Reno) were the only ones even bothered by it. When Yuffie and Genesis find out, there's going to be hell to pay! Lazard can say what he likes about Yazoo "running away", but I doubt they will buy it. They were already suspicious about things surrounding Yazoo, and now that Tseng is gone as well...yeah.
I'm glad you liked it, honey! Thank you so much!
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Date: 2009-11-30 08:52 pm (UTC)Excellent episode! None of the tension and drama has been lost, in fact I'm on the edge of my seat biting my nails and waiting for next week.
Sucks to be Reno right now, huh? He deserves it and I feel no sympathy for him. None at all. I laugh at his pain!!! *evil face of doom*
I know Yazoo's not dead. She'll come back. She has to!
Cloud was awesomely cool in this. He is so on the ball and on top of things. I am offically is number one fangirl :)
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:12 pm (UTC)I'm glad this first episode has made everyone so happy! I was afraid too much time had passed, but the thread was picked up pretty well, I think!
Reno and Rufus both are in dire straights right now. Reno had this coming, big time, but his feelings for Yazoo are genuine. Had he known what was going to happen, then he would never have gone through with Rufus's plan.
And YAY for Cloud having a fan! WOOT! He got off to a pretty bad start, but he's making a comeback! WOOT!
I'm so glad you liked it, boo boo! Thank you so much!
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Date: 2009-11-30 10:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-03 08:09 pm (UTC)Reno had it coming, he SO did :D
I'm really glad you liked it! Here's hoping for a fun and exciting Season Two, yeah?! *snuggles you*
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Date: 2009-11-30 10:28 pm (UTC)*cry*
Noooooo!
First Zack, and now Yazoo? Nuuuu!
*kicks Reno* THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT, BITCH!
T^T
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-03 11:00 pm (UTC)The illogical part is crying in a corner. ^^;
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Date: 2009-11-30 10:46 pm (UTC)But first.. I am SO happy that you started again already ! :D I was delighted when I found your message ! THANK YOU !!!! My monday wasnt quite the same without it ;)
and now.. I feel..
-almost nauseous at the idea of Yazoo being dead. Then I remembered what you said last and decided that the babe is just unconscious in the trunk of Rude and is going to wake up with the headache and nausea of her lifetime !.(Because I dont even want to consider the alternative.. :(... )
-outraged and disgusted at the way Rufus reacted when hearing about Yaz`death. That is, he hardly reacted at all. And then freaking Lazard proves to be an ever bigger asshole. Trying to spray lies and tarnish Yaz`s reputation. They disgust me to no end. I wished that the Cetrans would start a war with them, honestly.
-kind of happy to see Reno in such a state. Revenge... Kad is gone, and Yaz is dead or so he thinks. He is in for an even bigger shock when he recovers his memories.
And I cant wait for next week !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my God !!! XD its just so exciting !
ps : and Reeve who thinks he has problems.... ;)
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:03 pm (UTC)And WOOT! Thank you! I wanted to get things kicked off with some DRAMA :D And I'm so glad to be back! I was going to wait a month, but I couldn't hold out that long! I love you guys and I love writing this soap, so I just had to do it :D!
And don't worry about Yazoo ;)
Rufus will grow up this Season. Remember those little books Lazard dropped in his lap? Those are going to be fundamental in Rufus's reformation. And we'll see how far they get in their lies about Yazoo ;)
Reno was long overdue an emotional meltdown. He's pushed and pushed Kadaj enough that this split was needed. I'm not sure that it benefits Kadaj in the end (due to scary Tseng) but it certainly taught Reno a lesson he really needed to learn!
You're right, compared to all this mess, Reeve having to choose Yuffie or Genesis is really small potatoes! LOL!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, honey! Thank you so much!
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Date: 2009-12-04 01:05 am (UTC)Heck, I love to give him bad manners sometimes ;)
I wont worry about Yazoo then !! XDDD Thank you again for being back already with that awsome chapter !
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Date: 2009-11-30 11:08 pm (UTC)I wanted to take that bottle and fwap Rufus right over the head with it. I started laughing when he realized how much crap he'd be in if anyone suspected he had anything to do with Yazoo's death. And speaking of which... *cries* I really hope you're laying it on thick and she isn't really dead.
And poor, poor Reno. Where I wanted to strangle him before, I wanna cuddle him now. Because, even though he was really a bastard to Yazoo, he doesn't remember, and he has no idea what's going on. And that's genuine concern he's showing.
And Marlene's just heartbroken. Because she didn't know what else to do when she called Rude in there.
So, you've hooked me once again. Hope to see more soon! :D
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:59 pm (UTC)And Reno is going to flip his shit when he remembers what he did. It was different when he thought he was walking out on her but that she would be alive after the fact and maybe he could get her back again...now that she is dead, he's going to be so pissed at himself! And you're right, it is genuine concern - for what it's worth, he does truly care for Yazoo.
And I'm hoping to bring Marlene in more in this Season, maybe set her up in a little romance with Denzel? She's in a tough spot now because she blames herself, but we'll see how it all turns out.
I'm so glad you liked it, honey! Thank you so much!
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Date: 2009-12-01 12:16 am (UTC)Awesome, awesome start!!
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-01 01:34 am (UTC)Which totally should not be so hot.no subject
Date: 2009-12-03 07:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-01 03:29 am (UTC)Can I send you a Christmas card? ^^
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-04 02:49 am (UTC)And my AIM name is AvalonsCloud if you want to add me. I'd love to talk, I really need someone's shoulder to cry on right now :(
*HUGGLES*
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Date: 2009-12-01 05:58 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-03 07:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-01 02:00 pm (UTC)Yay for the update! *sighs in relief* I was not expecting you to update again this soon, but I'm so happy that you did! And now that I've broken my lurker policy you're going to be seeing reviews from me fairly often. ^-^
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:39 pm (UTC)I wasn't sure I should start again so soon, but I was missing putting the Soap up and I had two episodes done, so I went ahead :D I'm impulsive, what can I say, lol! And YAY for delurking! Let me know anything and everything you want, I love feedback! *snuggles you*
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Date: 2009-12-01 06:26 pm (UTC)God... and we still would have Sephiroth, Kadaj, Tseng and Zack...
It's promising a lot and I was missing you so much in the mondays...
Hugs and love dear Stacey
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:37 pm (UTC)Rufus and Reno are both in it bad now, and Lazard is the one picking up all of the pieces, but he won't let them off of the hook that easily ;) There is more Reeve and Genesis to come, but not without a little angst and drama beforehand. And the others will all make appearances as things progress!
I was missing you all, too! When I finally had a viable two episodes done, I went ahead and started again, because I want to keep this going as long as possible :D
Hugs and love right back at you, boo boo!
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Date: 2009-12-05 10:06 pm (UTC)Love to you!
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Date: 2009-12-02 02:32 am (UTC)I love the plot and the Season I has ended just wonderfully. Not sure if you remember, but I've mentioned in one of my earlier posts that you got me hooked onto Yazoo x Reno ship, then you had the odacity to hook me again with Reeve x Genesis ship!!! Man I love those two and can't wait to see where that relationship leads to. I swear, the painting Reeve is thinking of, brilliant. The way you slowly transition him off of Yuffi and onto his 'manly' love *swoon*
But what really has me on pins and needles is the appearance of the sexy Sephiroth and *cough*possiblesmutwithcloud*cough*
I know, I know, I am not getting my hopes too high up, but a girl can dream, right?
I am so excited about season II, and I beg your forgiveness for not posting comments as often as I should - you still rock, your soap is amazing and it is what keeps me looking forward to Mondays.
Keep up the great work!!! No, seriously, please do :)
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:34 pm (UTC)And I do remember! I'm always a fan of hooking people on my fave pairings :D, and now it's a win with Reeve and Genesis?! WOOT!!! I have to say, they've got a bumpy road ahead of them, but they will get there! Those two were just made for one another! So thank you so much!
Hehe, don't worry, Seph is coming! I keep promising, but I mean it! He may not feature much in this Season, but he's due to swoop down on Midgar for sure!
And again, no worries! There's no requirement for comments! I'm just glad to have people who love to read the soap! *snuggles you* Thanks again!
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Date: 2009-12-02 03:04 am (UTC)This season has started off depressing like whoa, but also strangely exciting.
I'm so glad to see Reno and Rufus freaking out in their own ways, though it's almost a shame Lazard is there to play damage-control.
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:31 pm (UTC)Yes, this season is going to center around another character, I'm still wobbling about which. There will be more Reeve, more Gen, more Yuffie, and definitely more Cloud and Lazard. I have a lot to choose from!
And you're right, it's high time some freaking out started happening, lol! Rufus is in The Big Trouble now, and Reno is going to be furious when he remembers his part in things.
And Lazard will always get his due :D Nothing comes without a price, after all.
Glad you liked it!
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Date: 2009-12-02 05:17 am (UTC)*dies from the epic*
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Date: 2009-12-03 07:28 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked it! YAY for Season Two!!!!
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Date: 2009-12-02 11:11 pm (UTC)Drama, suspense, loads of guilt!!! Oh man, they're ALL in it to their eyeballs, and I can't wait to see what comes of it!
A character that really stands out in this episode is Lazard! He's cool, composed and the only one to stay in control and take over where everybody else is panicking!
I'm almost inclined to say poor Reno, but then again no, because, God, he had it coming!
And I wanna know what happened to Zack! I think you're tormenting me deliberately, you ebol you! The worst part is that you enjoy it too! ;D
Amazing first episode, honey!!! I can't wait until next week!!!
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:21 pm (UTC)I'm really glad to hear that Lazard stands out! I'm still exploring his character and getting used to him, so it's good to know that it's working!
Reno definitely had it coming! But on the other hand, his feelings for Yazoo are genuine, so he truly is going to miss her.
And no worries, I'll give you more Zack :P lol!
I'm so glad you liked it, honey! Thank you so much for all of your help! *snuggles you tight*
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Date: 2009-12-03 08:26 pm (UTC)And dont't worry! There is no true death in a soap :D Trust me!
Reno is going to really hate himself when he remembers the part he played, but he only has himself to blame...and his odd code of honor that only he understands.
Rufus really deserves to be diced up, but he's going to find redemption this Season, I think! Those books Lazard dropped into his lap are going to play a huge part in it.
Lazard is amazing, and he will definitely not let Rufus skate out of this lightly. He's not that kind of guy. There will be lots of squirming and lip service from Rufus, that is for sure :D
And as far as I'm concerned, you never have to be quiet again! I love feedback, and knowing what you guys are thinking is what helps me shape the soap! This is a joint effort, after all - without the help you all give me, there wouldn't be a soap at all! So thank you!
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Date: 2009-12-06 11:42 pm (UTC)I didn't expect this to be up this soon but I definitely call it a nice suprise.
And this is one hell of a first episode. You sure didn't slow down the pace and created even more cliffhangers than there were already left from season one.
Looks like Cloud will be a bit more in the center of attention this season but since I enjoy your Cloud, I fully support that :)
Yazoo worries me a bit...or rather what Rude is going to do with her 'body'. And can't wait to read Reno's reaction when he becomes aware of his role in this disturbing act.
Wonderful start! I'm excited for the new season...and already convinced it'll be just as great as the first ;)
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Date: 2009-12-17 05:32 pm (UTC)I wanted to wait longer but I just couldn't. When I had two solid episodes written I just went for it :D
I'm hoping to sustain the pace and action for quite some time and really push this season through. There is a lot I want to have happen and I realized I hardly got anything done last season, lol!
Cloud is coming into the spotlight along with Genesis and Reeve, and thank you! I'm glad you like Cloud!
The Yazoo/Rude/Reno situation just gets more tangled. That's about all I can say on it without giving things away.
Thank you so much again, honey!!!
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Date: 2010-04-28 11:58 pm (UTC)On to read more. I might catch up by the time you finish the season! :)
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Date: 2013-06-19 11:17 am (UTC)And yeah marlene, thats your fault. You called Rude. You killed Yazoo.
And Lazard.. I want to see his death in this fic.
And about kadaj, hes with Reno when he was 14 right? And hes still 18 now? So he lives with Reno only 4 years? But he knows Yaz for 9 years, am I right?